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amaranthineries — Some One Thing
Published: 2007-10-17 23:53:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 253; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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I ate a very large apple once.It sat in my throat for days,
I felt like a snake
--or a glutton,
some one thing or other that sins.
Overlaps.
Disconnects.
And then I read a book once.
About love and coping with.
But it didn't help me, no,
It didn't solve a goddamn thing.
And I felt instead a hate,
cold fury down my spine.
Something that
Fuses.
Overlaps.
Disconnects.
You looked at me once.
With a glint of intent,
as a ring slid down my finger,
through into the bone.
And I was sure,
though silent as you were,
that you'd never felt hunger
or hate
or anything but me.
Something that
Meets.
Fuses.
Overlaps.
Disconnects.
Comments: 28
Duuude... something more helpful may come along in time, but I'm nothing if not obtuse, as that weird word-mash of mine on my page has shown.
You're playing some very close to the bone subjects off against each other, and I feel a little excited and violated reading it. Coming from me, that is very, very good news for your writing.
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Hahaha, thank you very much. 
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I can't believe I never commented on this. It's fantastic.
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Thanks so much, dearly.
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Heee! ^^ Thank you hunnie.
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This reminded me instantly of a song, God Save The Mona Lisa. Love this. Like, wow. VERY good voice used throughout. So moving.
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Thanks very much, you.
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This reminds me of something I would hear at a poetry reading. I really like it.
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Thank you. =3 Did you send in your thing yet?
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I took one with me but um... Chicago is a bust. So I don't know where I'm going to go now.
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=3 Well, where do you actually wanna be? You could do something romantic, like chase inspiration around the world...
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Anywhere and Everywhere like a true romantic at heart, but I don't really think that chasing inspiration around the world is going to help me making a living, though I might take some interesting pictures.
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Living-schmiving. 
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And this is where I go all evil and say in order to honestly live you need money. Doing what you love isn't living, it's existing.
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What's life without passion? A worse life than one without money, surely...=/
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It's like a flower without water or light, sometimes passion needs a fuel and sometimes there isn't anything there to give it a push.
p.s. thanks for answering my email, it was greatly appreciated.
p.s.s. Lisa and I are resurrecting leviathon.
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I honestly didn't know what to say back.
And good, very good. Are you guys making a new comm and everything, or what?
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Maybe after all of this there is nothing to say back. I just hate that you can't even be my friend anymore, but it's your own choice.
I'm not sure what we're doing. We talked about it last night.
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I don't really talk to anyone online anymore. I think the last person I talked to was Lisa for like two seconds a few days ago. And before that...it's been months since I've been on aim, so only through like facebook and deviantart and livejournal. I just don't have the energy after school, work, and the extra curricular stuff.
Is it going up soon? I'd like to see it's rebirth.
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I suppose I understand but it just seems like before you were never really around, you were never around to answer or talk, and I'm sorry I'm such a douche when it comes to things like this.
I hope to revive it but usually things like that never get done with lisa, lol.
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...You make a very valid point. >> Don't apologize for my never being around. But please believe I do what I can.
Pleeeeease do it. Please, please, pretty please?
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i'm actually working on a comm right now myself.
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For Levi? Can I see?
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No, not levi. A whole new idea, it's just an experiment. A carnival, a thread comm for those who can give me great ideas.
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Carnival? That might be kinda cool...
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I'm really hoping so. It's been haunting me from songs on my media player, to lyrics, books, dreams. Hell even pictures of the pretty boys in my mypictures folder.
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