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Published: 2008-06-08 23:15:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 143; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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Description elation.
another provocation.
[lay blame on the grids
that restrain us so]


elating.
without apology,
the act of forgetting
the pitch that
your mother's parading.
[excuse to let me
on my way
your past forbade me]


elated.
trusted in the opposites
to leave you asphyxiated,
trusted in the grace
of opiates.
[trust in the form of
blocked pain receptors
and swollen promises
falling from false lips,
the "I'll never again"s
of the world]


elate.
leave it to you
to save face
in front of your God,
secure your fate.
[but I'll never define
my love for you
or anyone
by the words I write
or the things I say]
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Comments: 4

Deltabeta [2008-06-14 18:18:21 +0000 UTC]

This is ultra-creative. I love the title, then the format makes the title look brilliant. Great work.

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amaranthineries In reply to Deltabeta [2008-06-27 06:41:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. =3

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chibi-muse [2008-06-12 04:38:54 +0000 UTC]

<3 the format of this is sublime

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amaranthineries In reply to chibi-muse [2008-06-27 06:42:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, darling. ^^

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