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Published: 2007-01-29 05:44:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 77; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Oxygen, older than timeTravels through
Deep
Caverns, dark
Patterns in the sky.
Weaving back and
out and in,
and it's running back
At the drop of a pin.
The viscosity of love and lust,
the difference between
deception and mistrust,
and I promised
nothing
yet you took that chance.
And forgiveness was
never part of the plan.
But what if I just stop,
and turn
back into oxygen
and decay
and earth?
Become a timeless entity,
thicker than love
and eternity?
Stronger than any bond
I could break,
More basic than
any life I could take?
The curtain collapses
On an empty stage,
Though the audience
Will rant and rave,
Be it so.
A martyr without a cause,
Only appears out of loss.
Though she will rejoin
Her rightful kin-
Negative space and oxygen.
Comments: 5
DementisVenustas [2007-01-31 21:59:40 +0000 UTC]
I love this. A lot. ^_^
Especially the last few lines.
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amaranthineries In reply to DementisVenustas [2007-02-02 06:06:31 +0000 UTC]
Awh, thanks! ^.^ Was going for the punch in the last line, glad that it got through somewhat.
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DementisVenustas In reply to amaranthineries [2007-02-03 03:24:28 +0000 UTC]
^_^ It got though perfectly, sweetie. It was rockin'.
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amaranthineries In reply to Zomai [2007-02-02 06:06:08 +0000 UTC]
Primal - excellent! Thanks!
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