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amaranthineries — Wake Up Now
Published: 2007-11-02 04:15:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 65; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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Description Instead I whisper
because I cannot scream
for the life of me...
for the life of me
this overwhelming sense of futility
draws lines and limitations,
it keeps silent my voice
sparse my actions,
sparse my actions felt
but oh dear
just because I don't match movement to my emotions
doesn't mean I can't feel every little sighing heartbreak,
it just makes me less aware of the deficit
and I am disoriented,
I am I am I am
I am poisoned by my own inaction
passive passive passive non-aggression
don't kid yourself girl,
reservation does not equal perfection
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endingStart [2007-11-02 05:57:33 +0000 UTC]

Reservation may not mean perfection, but the last two lines of your poem certainly do.

Another one nicely done. Now hurry up and get famous before I get too old to...uh oh, I forgot my thought.
It's happening already!

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amaranthineries In reply to endingStart [2007-11-04 09:13:10 +0000 UTC]

Haahhhaha!! Oooh dear. You keel me.

D Thank you very much!

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