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Published: 2007-08-19 05:09:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 147; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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If you disassociate----where before you seemed so full
----of joy, where will the history go?
If you disassociate
and leave behind all those things
that made your heart dance on its strings
leave leave leave
miss her
miss me
miss the signs on the roadside
that read distance and appropriate speed
If you disassociate
---remove preferences and pictures carved
---into your memory like deeply set scars
surely, you will
miss her
but will you
miss me?
miss the signs on the roadside
that read distance and appropriate speed
and you'll miss her,
but will you miss me?
You seem preoccupied tonight...
tr: (when you look at me,
do you see my hair light?
do you see my eyes blue?
do I mean anything but her to you?)
Comments: 6
ScribbledNotes [2007-09-01 06:32:44 +0000 UTC]
This reads VERY well, the repetition works so well.
Titles? I like what you have...
Disassociate - Leave Behind... though that's too direct, eh?
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amaranthineries In reply to ScribbledNotes [2007-09-06 05:52:50 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I was worried that the lyrics of this song wouldn't live up to the piano bit, so this is somewhat reassuring to tell you the truth.
I was just spouting it, to tell you the truth. >> Needed a filler that was three syllables, and it matched.
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ScribbledNotes In reply to amaranthineries [2007-09-06 06:17:56 +0000 UTC]
No worries, no worries. This is indeed a clever piece.
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amaranthineries In reply to Zomai [2007-08-24 17:26:01 +0000 UTC]
Guh, soon hopefully. Fingers crossed. >> Maybe I can get Dave to record me playing it live.
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Zomai In reply to amaranthineries [2007-08-24 18:17:06 +0000 UTC]
I'm excited to hear it. ^_^
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