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Published: 2008-09-03 06:05:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 44; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description feel a failure
(up)
to rip your efforts
(off)
from the very marrow
in your bones.

I'm just so tired of this,

the childish whims
(in)
and hedonistic fancies
(out)
lack of your intensity
(in)
constant escapism
(out)

breathing
(in)
moaning
(out)
seething
(in)
screaming
(out)

for your attention,

personality,

affection.

run dry long time ago.

so suck the ambition
(out) of every available
orifice.

lewd and crying,
lying repeatedly to myself,
saying you're
(in) love when
you've obviously
run out.
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Comments: 5

Zomai [2008-09-03 22:54:13 +0000 UTC]

Looking at this objectively >_>;;

I really like the last three lines, the play of running out of love as if being in it was holding an amount in a cup and being out of it would be... holding an empty cup?

Yeah.

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amaranthineries In reply to Zomai [2008-09-30 06:28:04 +0000 UTC]

=3

That was a fun line to play with.

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chibi-muse [2008-09-03 17:26:44 +0000 UTC]

*hugs* bad times girl. Did you get my postcard?

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amaranthineries In reply to chibi-muse [2008-09-30 06:27:01 +0000 UTC]

Nah, just me being mellow dramatic. >>

I DID, and I laughed so hard. Goddamn that picture was awesome.

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chibi-muse In reply to amaranthineries [2008-09-30 23:20:09 +0000 UTC]

yay! It's hard to be melodramatic while laughing at silly pictures

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