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written: 17.03.2010photo by: ecaterina [link]
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PurpleInk777 [2010-12-09 06:24:07 +0000 UTC]
So sad!! That poor girl!!
This is gorgeous!! So powerfully, yet tenderly written!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!
Prince ROX!!
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starisis9 [2010-12-08 21:29:00 +0000 UTC]
very nic, puts a new spin on happily ever after doesn't it ? XD
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007Balel [2010-12-08 17:48:43 +0000 UTC]
Well done on this great visual poem !!...
I love the imagery and the sense of emptiness at the end.... Gives a feeling of loneliness and abandonment (which is what the poem is about)
Also I love the image you used
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ametyst21 In reply to 007Balel [2010-12-08 19:39:38 +0000 UTC]
thanks so much yes, emptiness is quite specific... sometimes we don't realize it is already present in our life...
thanks again for your comment and support
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Anthro7 [2010-12-08 05:00:33 +0000 UTC]
I tend to think I've faved your work before... Your name stands out in my head. For that I say, well done again!
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MagicalJoey [2010-12-07 19:54:24 +0000 UTC]
Another beautiful visual poem. The grammar is a bit wonky in places, and why have you chosen to capitalise some words (Him, She, Friend)?
Otherwise, I love the talent you have for picking images that fit the poems. Do you write the poems first and then choose the image or do you find an image and get inspired to write the poem?
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ametyst21 In reply to MagicalJoey [2010-12-07 20:40:10 +0000 UTC]
about grammar and capitalization, the answer would be like always - it was really on purpose, though i know that not for all it may seem successful and i appreciate the comment and about images, i always write first and then look for the photo...some of my latest works are still in the shelf because i can't find anything what i would decide would suit the work...about the inspiration - usually these are my feelings. but sometimes i hear some word somethere and suddenly i know that it would be the center of my work...it comes almost out of nowhere
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MagicalJoey In reply to ametyst21 [2010-12-07 20:51:50 +0000 UTC]
Where do you look for your images? DA stock accounts?
I understand what you mean about the inspiration.
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ametyst21 In reply to MagicalJoey [2010-12-07 20:59:57 +0000 UTC]
if you look under the poem, it is always written there whose the photo is most of them are from my sister's gallery; some others are done by my friend and some by myself
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MagicalJoey In reply to ametyst21 [2010-12-07 21:57:50 +0000 UTC]
Have you ever tried searching the stock galleries on DA? Most of them allow you to use their work as long as you credit them (like you do by saying 'picture from bla')
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ametyst21 In reply to MagicalJoey [2010-12-08 06:34:22 +0000 UTC]
actually, i do...i mean - recently have i published "The Dead Letter (To D.)" on the background made by some devianter but i usually first look for sth in my own stock
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BranislavPavlovic [2010-12-07 19:46:27 +0000 UTC]
Nice poem!
I read it and to be honest it's very deep and sad
So i thought you deserve a fave
Keep writing
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MarioSonicLover [2010-12-07 18:05:20 +0000 UTC]
Oh...my.....goodness........I think I'm gonna cry.....
This is so beautiful....could I possibly drawa picture realated to this?
I'll give you credit for the writing.
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ametyst21 In reply to MarioSonicLover [2010-12-07 18:10:53 +0000 UTC]
wow!!! i would be honored i only hope to get the note from you when you draw the picture
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MarioSonicLover In reply to ametyst21 [2010-12-07 18:12:37 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, sure.
I was going to draw the picture in Sonic Style if thats okay with you?
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ametyst21 In reply to MarioSonicLover [2010-12-07 18:18:14 +0000 UTC]
oh, i think it would be interesting to see such a version of my poem i'd be happy to see it
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MarioSonicLover In reply to ametyst21 [2010-12-07 18:28:25 +0000 UTC]
Great! I'll start working on it right now!
I'll send you a note when I finish.
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