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Published: 2007-04-10 18:05:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 1537; Favourites: 46; Downloads: 61
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Does anyone else find her a little bit creepy?

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The coloring on her body...SUCKS. But I actually love how I did her face/head.
It looks soft too, doesn't it?

Haruno Sakura (c) Masashi Kishimoto
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Comments: 48

Twistazoomalark [2007-10-21 01:56:22 +0000 UTC]

heehee Cute X3

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kimi-chong [2007-09-27 01:09:53 +0000 UTC]

aww so good

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AmiFire [2007-08-17 19:28:27 +0000 UTC]

Where'd my comments go?

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motherofyou [2007-04-20 09:03:19 +0000 UTC]

that's so cool, i lurve the fang....I WANT ONE!!

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AmiFire In reply to motherofyou [2007-04-20 12:44:02 +0000 UTC]

Haha.

YEY FOR PLASTIC SURGERY

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Or something like that

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SailingBreezes [2007-04-20 00:27:07 +0000 UTC]

Nice job on the fists! (Fists are always so hard!)

Anyways, I second what CC said down there, though I understand where you're coming from with this being a "Chibi" picture and all. So, I'll just add my two cents here...

Yeah, the shading on the skirt is a little off. From what I understand by this, Sakura's stance has the torso turned a quarter to the right (hers), while the lower half of the body is almost-straight-on to the audience. Right? The problem is that it's too heavily shaded if that's the case. The shading shouldn't be as drastic since her pelvis is turned closer to the light source than her torso. Dig?

And, a minor anatomy quibble. Her elbow. Bad news first: no one likes elbows. Elbows are ugly. Still, they gotta be shaped right. Elbows are more like... they're not a true, soft point when they're bent. There's the curve of the arm, then there's a sharp, rounded angle. Given the position of Sakura's arm in this pose, the bone in the forearm should stick out, something like this: [link] (ugh, bad image, sorry. It's too small! )

Anyway, these are just some things are noticed. Keep it up, Ami-chan!
(By the way, I love Sakura. That's how I found you in the first place. I saw your icon and was all like, "It's Saku-chan!" )

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AmiFire In reply to SailingBreezes [2007-04-20 00:39:07 +0000 UTC]

Daww thanks so much!
I'm still learning, so CC is very good, even when its strick. Whoot whoot!

Yeah! I'm in love with her... in... yeah. As much as a girl can love another female anime character. Haha.

Thanks so much nee-chan!

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SailingBreezes In reply to AmiFire [2007-04-20 22:56:27 +0000 UTC]

~!

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Haurhi [2007-04-14 23:50:48 +0000 UTC]

XD you gave her a fang XD

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AmiFire In reply to Haurhi [2007-04-15 02:18:27 +0000 UTC]

Of course! It gives it a better effect

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Haurhi In reply to AmiFire [2007-04-17 08:19:23 +0000 UTC]

lol, nice avatar ^^

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RandomSpinda [2007-04-14 02:29:22 +0000 UTC]

Nyeah! Ish good! ^^

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Constructive-Crit [2007-04-12 05:08:22 +0000 UTC]

Her body is fairly awkward, while the placement of the arm in the front is quite tilted in a awkward way. Her head is pretty large compared to the body, even the way the body is placed makes it seem even larger, as her eyes a fairly far apart. You did a fairly well job at the coloring, though her shirt has a awkward bulge in the middle where it shouldn't be. Do you see what I'm trying to say there??

Like I said the coloring is done fairly well, try working on the body movements to make her seem less awkward and stiff. Keep it up sweetie!

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AmiFire In reply to Constructive-Crit [2007-04-12 17:56:51 +0000 UTC]

To tell you the truth, I know about the body. When I was doing the line art, I spent about 30 minutes trying to replace the arm closer to the body and not so...out there. But I gave up, because I have no patience. The other stuff I agree with, except the head part. Its chibi, so the head is supposed to be large.. I think. maybe I'm just on crack. :>

Thanks so much!

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NinjaMatty [2007-04-11 20:04:32 +0000 UTC]

wow this picture is awesome ami-chan ! <3 I love the coloring and her expression ! <3 you are improving with each drawing you post !

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AmiFire In reply to NinjaMatty [2007-04-11 21:14:47 +0000 UTC]

Awww

Thankies!!!

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youcancallmecrash [2007-04-11 15:45:38 +0000 UTC]

me not much of sakura fan...me more naruto...shikamaru...kiba...hinata fan mostly naruto!!! HE IS UBER AWESOME! -_-;;; anyway i like the pic good job!

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AmiFire In reply to youcancallmecrash [2007-04-11 21:11:43 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah! GO NARUTO!

Haha.

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youcancallmecrash In reply to AmiFire [2007-04-11 22:15:46 +0000 UTC]

NARUTO ROCKS!!!

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darkstarchan [2007-04-11 04:45:29 +0000 UTC]

OO
OOOOO

OOOOO!!!
I DO!

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AmiFire In reply to darkstarchan [2007-04-11 04:49:23 +0000 UTC]

Hehe

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xPenguinxPuffx [2007-04-11 04:06:38 +0000 UTC]

OMFGVAMPIRE. lol

Whaddya sayin'?! I think your coloring's awesome! *coughBetterthanminecough*

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ToonTwins [2007-04-11 04:02:18 +0000 UTC]

I'm not a big Sakura fan, but you drew her really well here

And Sakura is always kind of weird

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AmiFire In reply to ToonTwins [2007-04-11 04:17:32 +0000 UTC]

Hehe.

I can always draw more things.

What kind of fan are you?

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ToonTwins In reply to AmiFire [2007-04-12 02:57:21 +0000 UTC]

Well, we're fans of Naruto and Sasuke

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AmiFire In reply to ToonTwins [2007-04-12 03:13:45 +0000 UTC]

Okay!
^^

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devious-tofu [2007-04-11 00:52:55 +0000 UTC]

I think it's just her expression. And she does have a fang. xD

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AmiFire In reply to devious-tofu [2007-04-11 01:19:35 +0000 UTC]

x3

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FullMetal-Chrno [2007-04-10 22:55:37 +0000 UTC]

It's great. She looks uber-determined. You're skill is growing.

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AmiFire In reply to FullMetal-Chrno [2007-04-11 00:26:50 +0000 UTC]

Aww
Thankies!!

:3

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FullMetal-Chrno In reply to AmiFire [2007-04-11 01:23:35 +0000 UTC]

No problem.

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SakuraAngelTears [2007-04-10 22:29:57 +0000 UTC]

ohh! I love Sakura-Chan!^^
awesome work!

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AmiFire In reply to SakuraAngelTears [2007-04-11 00:09:09 +0000 UTC]

:3
I love Sakura too!!
OMG

lol

Thanks!

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Eternal-Nightmare202 [2007-04-10 22:22:18 +0000 UTC]

i love it the colouring doesn't suck!!

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AmiFire In reply to Eternal-Nightmare202 [2007-04-11 00:08:40 +0000 UTC]

Aww
Thank yous!

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Eternal-Nightmare202 In reply to AmiFire [2007-04-11 00:17:02 +0000 UTC]

np!

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Finder77 [2007-04-10 20:14:37 +0000 UTC]

CHAA! I think it looks cool! XD

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AmiFire In reply to Finder77 [2007-04-10 20:28:28 +0000 UTC]

:>

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BritanniaWD [2007-04-10 18:45:37 +0000 UTC]

Good work, and I like her fox-like teeth
Hair is very good, and eyes are great, but the skirt needs a little more work. Lovely work though, Ami-san

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AmiFire In reply to BritanniaWD [2007-04-10 20:26:28 +0000 UTC]

Work like how? Shading wise right?

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BritanniaWD In reply to AmiFire [2007-04-11 00:39:06 +0000 UTC]

Hmm... I was thinking maybe that and some detail on where the buckle is. You know, maybe a bit of grey to show the position of the buckle.

Bah. Don't listen to some random n00b who's never draw a picture like that ever

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AmiFire In reply to BritanniaWD [2007-04-11 01:19:09 +0000 UTC]

Hah okay.

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Musashibf [2007-04-10 18:37:28 +0000 UTC]

yea. it looks creepy just slightly. i think it might be the mouth position.

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AmiFire In reply to Musashibf [2007-04-10 20:25:58 +0000 UTC]

Hehe.

Maaaaaaaaaaaybe.

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Musashibf In reply to AmiFire [2007-04-11 20:50:46 +0000 UTC]

heh. its still awesome.

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demonko [2007-04-10 18:26:49 +0000 UTC]

nice work i it, it really looks great

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AmiFire In reply to demonko [2007-04-10 20:25:27 +0000 UTC]

:3

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demonko In reply to AmiFire [2007-04-10 20:42:38 +0000 UTC]

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