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Published: 2012-09-12 19:50:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 2519; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 3
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Started this a long time ago but didn't get around to finishing it since college started but now I did. Mostly. The scroll looks quite...weird. Awful name by the way hehe..and not much emotion there..the sketch had more.This was initially a gesture drawing too.
The stock is by Marcus Ranum
Critiques appreciated.
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Comments: 17
6footgeek [2012-09-13 08:15:16 +0000 UTC]
Le head needs a little bit of resizing.
besides that its pretty good.
I suppose a little bit of shading on the scroll and some writing may help?
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ammar93 In reply to 6footgeek [2012-09-13 09:09:37 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. err is the head too small? Well I also wanted to write something but just couldn't come up with anything
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6footgeek In reply to ammar93 [2012-09-15 18:23:38 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. looks a bit too small. Typically the body should be around 7-8 heads tall.
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ammar93 In reply to 6footgeek [2012-09-15 20:07:53 +0000 UTC]
better? well the resize seems to have messed with a few other things...I guess I'll get back to it later. stupid college
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6footgeek In reply to ammar93 [2012-09-21 14:47:04 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. looks more proportional now.
Yeah, welcome to Uni life, there is really no time for a lot of hobbies.
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ammar93 In reply to 6footgeek [2012-09-21 15:39:27 +0000 UTC]
Yay thanks for the help. Tbh I have a feeling this wip might stay a wip hehe. Yeah I just don't have much time anymore.
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6footgeek In reply to ammar93 [2012-09-21 16:09:13 +0000 UTC]
I know, its really hard to get back to something once you've finished it once.
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ammar93 In reply to 6footgeek [2012-09-21 16:56:25 +0000 UTC]
haha yup. You get tired of fixing the same thing over and over.
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