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Anaely — what are you waiting for?
Published: 2006-06-11 19:44:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 222; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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Description i'm hiding in the dark
tryin' to avoid your eyes...
i know that you can see
inside my frozen lies...
i've tried so hard
to let go and forget,
but how can i let go
of the only dream i've ever had?

they say you love me,
should i believe it?
they say you're wrong for me,
should i receive it?

i pray that you would see
the secret that i hide behind my eyes,
i hope that you can feel
the tears i cry behind my smiles...
i've loved you for so long;
but still i feel i pray in vain...
i tried to forget the dreams i had,
but they have chosen to remain...

i stand alone in darkness
and i pray that you'd see me like before
i'd give up everything for you;
what are you waiting for?...
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Comments: 7

Latestcraze [2006-06-13 14:54:46 +0000 UTC]

Wow...this is so wonderful...I'm going through the same thing right now!! Again wonderful!!

~~Portia~~

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Anaely In reply to Latestcraze [2006-06-14 17:56:57 +0000 UTC]

thanks...

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MotherDucky [2006-06-11 22:13:06 +0000 UTC]

thats awesome! I can so relate to your friend. I hope everything works out for her. This is not lame at ALL! Its very good!

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Anaely In reply to MotherDucky [2006-06-12 19:10:36 +0000 UTC]

thank you...

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MotherDucky In reply to Anaely [2006-06-16 17:11:11 +0000 UTC]

anytime ^^

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Leppaboy [2006-06-11 20:42:40 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful poem!

I'm glad u r back in the writing business
I wonder who's tha poem about

Anyway I think it aint lame at all, very good actually!!!

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Anaely In reply to Leppaboy [2006-06-12 19:10:22 +0000 UTC]

thanks...

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