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Published: 2018-12-05 16:35:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 216; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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I was listening to The Shadow Relm music from Spyro Shadow Legacy and i just got flashbacks of how absolutely dreadful going into the dark world was for me. The enemies were terrifying and you never knew where they would be lurking next.Some enemies i got used but it was still a "nopenopenope" feeling and then their were enemies like the Brains that took to many hits to kill and were the ultimate nope
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Hello there, I am from Every Thing MUST GO Journal.
This is a nice looking dragon. I like your characters and how you have drawn them. There is a lot going on in this scene. There is a story behind this scene and a lot of action. This scene keeps the eyes looking around to piece together what's happening. But, it's not so cluttered or too busy where the viewer gets lost or over whelmed.
The shading you have done on the dragon, show the direction that the light is coming from and also the direction of the dragon falling. Well done. Many individuals some times have a hard time working with directional light sources.Β
The details on this is also well done. The facet that you have the little rectangle that are in front or near the character, are inverted, is really neat and a great attention to small details. Well done.
There are two things that I think could really help make this awesome piece even more awesome. It looks like you have a little bit of colour on the squid like tentacle creature on the side, but it doesn't seem like the other characters have colour or if the colour is really faint and a bit hard to make out? But, I think if you add colour to all the characters, I think that will really finish this piece off nicely.Β
The other thing, I wanted to point out, is the the dragon seems to be the only character with the light reflecting on and thee other character don't seem to be affected by the same light source. I think if you added some reflection and more intense shadows on the rest of the character that will also add a nice depth and finished look to this awesome piece.
I like the concept behind this and I think it has a lot thought and style to it. Really cool work. Keep it up!
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Thank you very much for the critique i like all the suggestions and will keep them in mind for next timeΒ Β There's not much else i can say to respond ^-^
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Hey, I'm from !Β Great work on this. The pencil style is refreshing in a site full of digital art. It's drawn quite well, showing you have a great handle on the style. Nothing stands out to me that looks really super wrong or needs much improving. Tiny thing though, it looks like Spyro is going to push the button with his pinky claw instead of his index one. If you flip the pic, it would help, but just remember that for next time. Keep practicing, I think you have a lot of potential!
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thanks very much π
I did notice his hand being incorrect, but thanks sometimes i dont notice
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This all looks great, but the very bottom character looks kinda...messy? Might just be me though.
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I think it's the rough lines. If you smudged them out a little bit it would look better (in my opinion). The shape is also not symmetrical which is bothering me so fricking much ;-;Β
It's still an awesome piece with lots of detail though!!
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I thought it was just me when i thought he was not symmetrical, now i know its not just me and that sucks XD but i tried its pretty close.
I see what u mean with the shading, thanks ill smear it better next time.
Thanks again
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It's not ad really, I only noticed when looking closely.
No problem! Love to help
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