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Just when things started to heat up at the dojo, Gaby was chillin' with her friends Jessie and Aurora. Suddenly, Gabriela had the feeling Elenita was in trouble and she told her friends "Let's go to the dojo!" Will this sort of premonition foretells the result of Shizuka's fight against Tania? Will Gaby get there in time? Will Tania succeed where Rosario failed? All the answers next chapter, starting on Wednesday. Stay tuned.Remember to read from right to left.
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Gaby's Gaby-sense began to tingle, warning her that something's going on that isn't right!Β If she's quick enough, she might be able to intervene in things before they get way out of hand at the dojo.Β Hurry up, Gaby!
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will she get in time before Shizuka starts with the cutting and dicing
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Hmmmm. Looks like we may have Gaby intervening in the dojo fight.
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Sorry to be picky and correcty but wouldn't that be "Elenita... ? I swear I heard her Just now."
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S-Sorries, Just thought I should let you know.
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I love the whole page though, such spirit. <3
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Do you mean, Grammatically speaking?
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Yeah...
Sorry If I seem offensive, Just trying to helps...
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I don't know why the one typed there, is wrong for you?
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Idk, It doesn't feel right. Nothing really wrong with It.
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It's fine though, Just thought I'd let you know.
>o>
Also I'm keen to see the next page. It's Interesting thatΒ Gabriela has such a connection with Elenita.
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but it's not grammatically incorrect, right?
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Idk...Maybe someone will conform that. It Just didn't sound right.
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I'd check with someone, Just In-case another person notices though.
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yeah. I checked it and you're right. We are changing it. Thanks for your comment.
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Eh, really? I helped?
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YW.~
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as you can see her dialogue was changed.
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Well I hope no one notices. That way It's not Incorrect.
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I...~ don't know If It Is. Looks good to me.
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I look forward to the next page.
>_<
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Today we start with Chapter 14
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In this chapter the fight between Shizuka and Tania continues and also more Chao and Franny.
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I so look forward to It.
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K,~ I'm gonna see the next now.
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