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Just when everybody thought Gaby have had enough, she jumped in front of Karin breaking her wrist with a powerful kick.Karin should've been more cautious as Fernanda suggested her but...well, Gabriela helped her to learn it the hard way.Remember to read from right to left.
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YOWCH!~
O_O
Wrist's hit with such Impact, yeah, Ik they hurt lots. Someone sat on my hand once...
I had my hand In a weird position too. I wasn't looking either. Ugh Ik that pain well.
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she talked too familiar to Gaby
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Uh-huh. My advice after someone's been beat, don't egg them on more.
=w=;;
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She should've known better
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Whoa! Figures Gaby would not give her gym up without a fight.
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She's a real fighter
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she met her match with Fernanda,though.
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and the are classmates,too.
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Ouch, classmates that don't get along, so to speak.
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let-s say Fernanda never held a grudge against GabyΒ
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Aikido practitioners are selfless and calm
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yup. Aikidokas are relax and friendly people
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Hmmm. This may be something Gaby will need... then again, she won't need it.
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Gaby has too much hatred within herself
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Yeah, thus what i said about her needing some of it will never happen.
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uhoh this wont end well if I was gabby id quit if I were her I wonder what will happen next
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you'll know on Friday
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I'm just going to point out the eye color change for Karin between the panels.
*flying away*
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I would've loved a comment based on the story and its characters but I suppose the change in Karin's eye color was more interesting. *sigh*
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Alright, I guess comment on the art doesn't mean anything to you so I'll stick to story based comments from now on. Is OK to comment on the writing or just plot and character's mannerism?Β
I was trying to help improve the page with itsΒ continuity being true. That's what I do with scripts and stories.Β
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This page was originally made in 2012 when the creator was just starting to get aquainted with the program. Now he doesn't make such mistakes anymore, can you please forgive him? you can comment on both if you want but always in a respectful way. If you want to bash his artwork then I'd prefer you rather not. Thanks
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I made a small comment about the change in the eye color. That wasn't bashing the art work. It was supposed to help for future notice when he reworks the pages.
I won't comment about it again.Β
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It caught my attention how you paid attention to that...that's all.
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