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dragol [2017-01-15 01:52:08 +0000 UTC]

Lheta is so button, I mean her reactions are always so adorable )
And these two acts like her two grumpy uncles.
Anyway, that was pretty cool intro, I'm hooked totally!

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AligonRuler [2016-11-14 05:10:12 +0000 UTC]

I burst out laughing when she said,"You guys ever heard of google?"! XD

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MrPaintRavioli [2016-11-05 23:26:11 +0000 UTC]

Now you are giving me ideas for my audition...at least in regards to the arrival and Able's introduction.

Music cues (yes, me Grimlock still do that):

www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xl0rC3… (0:30 to end) The Data Thief goes nuts (starts in the previous page)
www.youtube.com/watch?v=bL8vNe… (0:00 to 0:41) Vanguard's speech about the tournament
www.youtube.com/watch?v=_9fu7X… (0:39 to end) "God dammit", Lheta swears to find her father
www.youtube.com/watch?v=vqtlSb… (0:00 to 0:50) Tower logo and Able

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Pro-roro [2016-10-09 23:27:01 +0000 UTC]

*Heavy breathing* Man... this is just the start. I can't wait to see what else you got in store

Lheta is so precious, but given your track record my gut is telling me to prepare my emotions...

GL Andrew!

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Popman71 [2016-10-09 15:31:52 +0000 UTC]

>8p

God this audition was great.  I love how tongue-in-cheek and adorable Lheta is.  Good luck to you Andrew!  If you make it in come January, I'll be REALLY looking forward to this story you've got cooking.

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Devicon [2016-10-06 08:50:45 +0000 UTC]

I GOTTA FIND OUT WHO KILLED MY DAD!

Great read, best of luck to you!

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Seikame [2016-10-05 12:29:27 +0000 UTC]

*screams and run everywhere*

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Reddleadr [2016-10-05 11:23:20 +0000 UTC]

brilliant just amazing

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PailKnight [2016-10-05 05:00:24 +0000 UTC]

Go find your dad you precious cinnamon roll! I BELIEVE IN YOU!

Lovely audition~

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TheFlippmeister [2016-10-05 04:20:14 +0000 UTC]

OOOO boiii it's starting upppp
Loving the audition tho! Super excited with watcha got planned, man. 

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MelCairoRose [2016-10-05 03:36:01 +0000 UTC]

maybe this is like a step up from Google friend.

Also now she can ride Cassius as her almighty steed.

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Strawberry-Eggs [2016-10-05 03:30:05 +0000 UTC]

Well done on the audition! Good luck!

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Pi3shark [2016-10-05 02:55:25 +0000 UTC]

ooooh so cool, Lheta is so freaking cute

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Themeguy [2016-10-05 01:52:35 +0000 UTC]

Jokes in the previous parts aside, I really loved this! Lheta is such a fun character, and her backstory is really interesting! Hope to see you go far in this one!

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Novactus [2016-10-05 01:04:08 +0000 UTC]

Now that I've seen Lheta in action, I gotta say I really like her. I hope you make it in with this.

I imagine Cassius has Wheatley's voice.

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CraftyKelly25 [2016-10-04 23:57:40 +0000 UTC]

I love her even more already. Hope for the best luck on getting in!

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fauxlyn [2016-10-04 23:56:35 +0000 UTC]

First thing's first: that outfit gives her some fantastic lift. Secondly, daaang you are fast!!

Wonderful entry, Lheta is every bit the cutie her app makes her to be. I love your color choices and the story has got me wondering what the deal is with her dad!

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quadgunnr [2016-10-04 23:46:55 +0000 UTC]

loved this, hope you get in. now i feel like entering myself. LOL

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Mindless-Corporation [2016-10-04 23:25:50 +0000 UTC]

MMMM good stuff man~ 

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Partulla [2016-10-04 22:47:07 +0000 UTC]

AA SUCH A GOOD AUDITION...
good luck andrew i love lheta so much I HOPE U GET IN

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