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Published: 2012-05-23 02:49:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 2250; Favourites: 152; Downloads: 16
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The Rush taken at Hideaways Beach 4-16-12Location: Paradise (North Shore of Kauai)
Canon 5D Mark II
Canon 17-40L Lens
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The first view is breath-taking! You did a great job on this one... But for me it's kind of confusing. First the island is so black, dat gives you a 'dark' feeling. On the other had you have the water in front that makes you feel like it should be a picture of a magical island.
For me on the left there is some kind of tree over te coast, I should have left that one out.
I'm nog sure, but it feels like you didn't make a choice between 'fancy' and 'dark', next time, maybe that is something you could consider.
There is te option with the dark clouds, but for some reason I should expect darker water (like in the back of the picture).
If you're going for 'fancy' crap a lot from the picture, focus on the colours of the sun and the smooth water, crap out the coastline for the biggest part, and if possible also most of the clouds or make them less 'dark'...
Well, sounds like a lot of critique, but you asked for it, maybe you can take some things out of it.
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Yeah! If I'm gonna write a comment now I have a problem... no way I'm gonna spend 100 words on describing that it looks great
He looks great!
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I updated my photo.....see if you like it a little more
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I made a 36x24 print of this with a 2" border, so I did have to crop just a touch to 34x22 and the first thing I cut was that little tree up top.......Hopefully the print comes out good
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Ofcourse it's gonna be allright
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Thanks for the critique
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Well considering all this, you did a great job (but I mentioned it befor I think 
I didn't crop eather at first... But lately I discoverd that a little cropping can make that a picture just seems to talk rather that 'be nice'
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The light and color are gorgeous and Bravo on a brilliant pov. Really is an impressive Image!
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You're welcome.
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That's wonderful! How'd you get the perspective so low? I love the feeling it gives of, it's so cool and calm and full of harmony ^^, great shot!
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Thanks! I had my camera on a tripod about 16 inches off of the ground and let the wave go underneath it. Kind of a gutsy move with over $3,000 of camera equipment on the tripod, but as they say, no guts, no glory
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Wow, I'm really glad it turned out alright! And you got a real good result as well
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