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*Update* Updating this one. I really liked this RP and hope to have others interested again.Anita is my character for this one. As the story goes, she is going to be executed for the crime she has committed. Her crime? Self defences. Sadly the judges aren't seeing it and aren't interested. So yeah.Β
Rules
This can be a any rate from friendly to mature.
No spitting, hardcore vore, farting, squeezing, killing, peeing or any of those things to the main character. Soft vore is fine.
No one line answers. No one word answers.Β
Proper grammar and spelling.
no switching around.
Any questions just let me know.
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(Ok, ill be a young boy who is secretly a demon who can change into a black dragon with red eyes and teeth.)
Suddenly, a small child, maybe only 13-14, ran out into the middle of the track, making the horses stop and rear up on their hind legs.
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a growl from a demonic corruptor (just think a very big wolf with black tendrils that come out its mouth to eat peoples souls\make them demons
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Hello there, Just wanted to say I will need more of a of a reply with this. I prefer more sentences than this as well as the same as the other one.Β
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no this is me saying what I want to be approching
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(is death of non essential namless charecters like the gaurds and prisoners ok or is that still a no go?)
a large growl shook the carriage as a large wolf paw bats the side of the carriage throwing it to its side.
the wolf had grabed hold of the carriage with itas maw and tore the side which was currently faceing the sky.
and with anger in its eyes it took the other prisoners and and tossed them out leaving each with large hole in there bodys left from its teeth.
the metalic smell of blood filled the wolves senses but it payed them no mind it was you it was after.
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(Yeah, death is totally fine for them)
The shaking of the carriage got their attention. There was a pause then they were shoved to one side of the carriage. Tumbling up and down as the carriage was being shaken about. The woman was at the bottom, she could not breathe from all the bodies on top of her. The prisoners scrambled to get up but they were blinded by the sun. Some of the prisoners saw the huge wolf glaring at them. Only a couple were able to scream before their scream was silenced. Once the weight was off her, she pushed up. Gasping, to get some air into her lungs. Turning to see the massive wolf in front of her with blood dripping from its mouth. She stared at the wolf until she narrowed her eyes.Β
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the wolf was larger then nature should alow and you cant help but be baffled by it as well as terrified.
it looked at you hunger in its eyes but it did not attack perhaps it was waiting for you to make a move.
whatever the case it stood sationary until you heard someone whistle immedietly the large wolfs gaze softened as it took you lightly in its jaws
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She stared at the massive wolf wandering what it was thinking. It was moments like these, that she had to time this right. It could go very wrong for her. It has not moved and neither has she. It must be waiting for her to move before going in for the kill. Anita heard someone whistling. Were they trying to distract the wolf? Ha, good luck with that. This thing has his eyes on her. What she did noticed was its gaze changed. Before she could even get to move she was already in his mouth. Where was he taking her?Β
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the wolf took you in its mouth and started walking in the direction of the whistle.
after awhile you grow tired being malnourished and dehydrated as a prisoner.
the wolf was gentle with you in its maw and was careful not to cut or bite.
you dont know where you are being taken but it seemed you where wanted alive which gave you a little security in the dark wet maw you where in.
you lay awake inside this maw wondering where you are being taken but the warmth of the wolfs tounge and the gentle rock if its walking calmed you and lulled you to sleepΒ
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(( Question, what if someone chose a naga Ish giant by chance? would that be allowed here? ))
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Yes it can be allowed)
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if I could do this, do you mind if I use this guy? ; w ; -> cyberburn360.deviantart.com/arβ¦
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yeah that is fine.
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:3 so do I start or do you usually start things off? just curious.*)
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It will you my dear as the rp has already start just need you add to it, as to what has happened or why the horses have stopped.Β
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Instead of foot prints out in front of the horses and the carriage....And it would rather look like it belonged to....A Giant snake? Whatever it could be, it indeed was nearby.....Hissing in random directions.....Getting ready to pounce its victims soon....
'What will they do now?' a thought which was from Cither the Corn snake naga.....Not one ounce of human skin was on him (already linked you the pic XD).
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The guards stared at the track marks. Their horses would not budge. Trying to get them to move only they move back. They knew there was danger about. Cracking of the whips to get them going.Β
Prisoners muttering to each other all expected one. A female, she sat there with her head down. Not to get nosey but it isn't that hard when she was the only one who had cuffs on her wrist and ankles. The rest of the prisoners only had them, on their ankles. Restless, they start banging on the walls.Β
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During the unsettle commotion, Cither quickly with speed and precision snatched up the horses, leaving the carriage no way of leaving the area. It was like a big flash of orange and yellow like colors that speed through there field of vision, clearly size of the snake Naga wasn't the only intimidating thing he had....after disappearing nearby, Cither quickly killed the horses and swallowed them down as a whole.
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The guard stared in horror. One moment their mounts were there and the next they were gone. This was unbelievable. A predator was here. Picking them off one by one. "Let's leave." One said to the other. Only for one to respond by saying "What about the prisoners?"Β
"Leave them. The thing can them as it lunch." Just like the two guards made a run for it, leaving the prisoners behind.Β
Banging on the walls, the prisoners demanded to get out. No one was there to hear their call. The woman glanced around to see, all the males weren't happy about this. Nothing she can do. Without the key, they were stuck in here. Biting her lip, she kept her head down and waited.Β
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After devouring the dead horses, Cither, ever so quickly dashes after the guards, within no time they were snatched up and devoured whole, knowing that whatever runs, he eats. But noting the wagon that was filled with noise and sounds, he ever so crawls, slithers up to the wagon and to then gently peek his snake like eye into the wagon to see what was in there.... his curiosity puts his tail like body to wrap around the wagon and himself, making sure there was no escape either...
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The creek of the wood, made them all go quiet. No one uttered a word. They froze on the spot. What made the wagon creek like that. Trying to make themselves not be noticed, but they don't know what truly is out there. One of them decided to be brave and peeked out the window. All he saw was scales. A gasp, he fell back. "snake!" He yelled before they all started cursing and trying to find of a way of escaping. Everyone shoving and pushing. The woman was shoved to the ground while being stepped on. Being stepped on people who are twice your weight is not fun at all.Β
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Cither would hide his laughter inside him seeing them panic, and so he gently tore off the roof of the wagon to see its contents he would think of. Now he cant see the girl yet, mostly hissing and licking his lips at seeing the other prisoners, boy did he hit the jackpot of people to devourer...His eyes growing wide in eagerness as well, his instincts kicking in quickly as he stares at them.
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The creaking of the wood, before the roof of the wagon, was torn off. Everyone was panickingΒ now. Pushing and shoving they did their best to get away. Not wanting to be the first person to be eaten by this predator. More pushing and shoving, the woman getting kicked in the side and in the face by other. Trapped down at the bottom, she couldn't move. Even when she tries to push up, only to have someone land on top of her. Curing and begging, many of them begged to the serpent to let them go. Saying how they have families and they didn't want to die. Though many of them were a rapist, murder, and many more. So seeing them beg for their lives was an interesting sight.Β
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Cither would start by taking one hand, grabbing a couple of the prisoners, using his other hand to grab another couple, and then quickly swallow them down after stuffing them into his mouth quickly. He couldn't see her yet, as he was preparing for another round of criminals to eat, as he hisses softly feeling the criminals he ate were struggling. Still he kept his tail around the wagon, so no one could escape at all, most of them were at there end of the line.
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Everyone was panicking, pushing and shoving. There was no control. This moment is was fight or be eaten. None of them had any choice. Prisoners could hear they inmate scream as they were being swallowed. Couple of them pulled out their own handmade weapons. They try to swing or stab his hand. Using anything they could this moment. There other disadvantage was the shackles.
Being kick and stepped on wasn't that fun. Her arms covered her head, waiting for these idiots to stop. They were screwed the minute they ventured into the forest. Now they were all going to be eaten alive.
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Cither would then quickly grab the rest of them in both hands, not seeing her yet, and began stuffing them down one by one into his maw, and swallow quickly. ignoring there attempts to hurt him and struggling, he was happily hissing softly as he was enjoying his savoring feast. So while keeping the wagon in his coils, he would think about this area of prison transports, better then hunting in the forest, so he will note this area down quickly during his little feast..
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With her being the only one on the floor while the rest of them were standing. she felt the weight lift off her body. Their scream were loud until they were muffled. Licking her dry lips she waited for a moment. Was she the last one? Debating for a moment whether or not. Could hear her heart up to her ears. Why was it so loud! Feeling nothing around her, slowly she looked up. Finally seeing the serpent for the first time. A gasp escaped her, as she watched him eat the other inmates as if they were nothing. Only one left in the wagon. All alone, she had no chance of escape. Shackles on her wrists and ankles. It would be hopeless to out run him.Β
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After devouring them all and quietly belched in the process, as he excused himself. He slowly looks down, and was just staring at the little girl who was in the wagon by herself, shackled twice? he thought. Gently he leaned down his head and sniffed her gently, not really the nature of a criminal, accepting her fate it seems. Cither hisses at this, liking the girl a lot now, so he gently nibbled her shackles of with great care keeping his sharp double teeth like daggers hidden away, and gently he picked her up from the wagon to then quietly ask her "Ssso how come your in the wagon for criminalssss?" he asked her softly with a couple flicks of his tongue.
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Just like that, they were all gone. Watching and waiting for him to notice her. It will be all over then. As they eyes meet, she held her breath. Flinching at his movement as he leaned closer to her. Closing her eyes not wanting to see this. His lips over her legs and wrist. A crunch was heard then nothing. Turning to her shackles were off. Surprised by this. Letting out a yelp as she was lifted up by him. Scared at how close she was to him until he asked her a question. He is asking why she was there? Was he judging her fate?Β
"I killed someone" She says softly not sure how he would react to her answer. But she had to be truthful.Β
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Cither would listen to her answer carefully, so he gently gripped her and then asked again softly "wasss there a good reasson you did ssso?" he asked her softly though making sure she wasn't acting like a trickster of some sort to him. He hated criminals especially the lying types. while he lifted the wagon with his other hand and chucked it somewhere deep in the forest, kind of like disposal for evidence. His tail tip eagerly swaying about as he stood/sat there with her on his right hand, being gripped.
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Her eye glanced away thinking about what had happened that night. Her fingers gripped into a fist before letting go and answered, "I was in an abusive relationship and marriage. Everything wasn't the way he liked it. If I did something wrong, hit. Accidentally burn his meal, hit. Didn't wash his clothes, his mother's way, hit. Enough was enough, after he gave me a black eye. I grabbed the first thing I saw and it was a knife. All i saw was red after that before the police appeared and said it was my fault. So this is where i am now." Watching him chuck the wagon away, as if it was nothing. She couldn't believe the strength he had.Β
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Cither listened and listened to her story about her little mishap of her husband before she ended up in the wagon, and here in his hand. So after she was done explaining herself, Cither gently hugged/pressed her to his chest softly, sort of like a comforting hug before he then spoken "I believe you aren't a criminal, Ssso here isss my proposssal. Come with me and I'll keep ya with me to be happy and fed and etc, Or, I can drop you off to a neutral village that isss sssecluded, and I'll come to visssit time to time to check on ya. Which choice do you Choossse?" he would softly and carefully explain to her, while he rested on and against his coils, as he rested on the spot.
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She stared at him waiting for something to happen. Expecting to be either chewed up on the spot or thrown into his mouth and swallowed whole. What surprised her was his reaction. Not saying a word to her but a simple gesture, thats all it took. Trying to hold it in, she was ready to burst into tears. Its been so long for someone to comfort her. All she got was excuses or people defend the other. Never her. Never anyone sitting down and listen to her. Never judging her or telling her it wasn't her fault.Β
A lot of weight was lifted up off her shoulders. Taking a deep breath, she looked up to the serpent while he told her, her choices. Stay with him or live in a village? Would the village even accept her? A new home. A new life. No one would know her. The woman thought on her choices and what to do. Suppose she could get a nice little home. She didn't know how the serpent lived. "Two choices for me. Its hard to pick. I don't know what the village is like or if they would accept me. It will take a lot of hard work. That is for sure" She says thinking about it more.Β
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Cither would then reassure her "there like you in some ways, sometimes not, but overall they'll accept you into the village. They know of my presence's around here in these parts, so whoever I drop off, they willingly take those people in." He explained carefully to her as well, before then saying "how I live, well I dwell in a warm cave that has a nice hotspring, mostly sleep everyday whenever I can get time to sleep" he explained again, as he continued laying there on his coils softly, still giving her a comforting hug, and some finger petting on her head time to time as well.
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Yeah of course
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(lol i kinda wanna be me but nagas don't have feet so i will be a giant tailmouth pony the mane pony is a light yellow the tail is almost a baby blue and hooves are a dark blue green) the foot print was the shape of a giant hoof
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The footprint appeared to be that of a giant cat. Possibly a lion or tiger
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The horses reared not wanting to go forward. They knew there was danger up a head. The guards on the other hand, they wanted to move on. The prisoners were getting restless. They wanted out! The only woman sat there while the men just argued and banged on the walls of the carriage. They chanted as they wanted out. Yeah right, like anyone would let these brutal criminals out.Β
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Suddenly, a loud roar is heard. It sounds like that of a tigers
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That made everyone froze on the spot. The two guards looked at each other. They knew whatever made that roar was huge. They had to get out. An idea came to ones mind. He whispered to his partner and agreed. They ran for it. Leaving the prisoners with the giant cat. There was plenty for it.Β
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(I'm doing a large white winged tigress for this)
I come out from behind the trees. Growling, I stalk my prey and approach the horses, hungry
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(Okay dokie)
The horses panicked they wanted away. They made a run for it with the carriage still attached to them. The prisoners held on as there was a runaway carriage going downy he dirt path.Β
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I roar and tackle one of the horses, pinning it down. I break the ropes attaching it to the carriage. I pin the horse down and deliver a quick killing bite to its neck
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The carriage nearly tipped over as one horse was taken down. The prisoners were thrown side to side in the carriage. They have nothing to hold onto but themselves. They were stuck here until the thing breaks open. The other horse just panicked some more and ran for it.Β
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I roar and run after the other horse. Jumping onto it's back, bringing down to the ground, I deliver another killing blow then drag it's body back to the other dead horse
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They could hear the big cat and the last sound of the horse. There was't anything they can do. They stay silent while that beast is out there feeding on the horses. They couldn't escape. The woman tries to have a peek out to see what it was, that as killing those horses.Β
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(this is the tigress pinterest.com/pin/A-GuSAAQwNAH⦠)
I start eating the first horse, lying down, my paws holding the body in place as I feast. My white muzzle becomes stained red from the blood
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