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Angelize — Doomsday
Published: 2006-07-15 13:54:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 67; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description When does it end,
The madness, the pain, the sorrow.
Should I keep feeling sorry for myself,
the pity inclosing my womb.

The trust betrayed,
and I have only myself to blame.
Am I sorry, am I done,
or does it start all over again.

How many times have I cried out your name,
yet you walked, not slowly, but fast away.
Do I crowd you, your future,
or to you, is it just another game.

I'm left standing, terrified,
in walls full of glass.
Too afraid to make a sound, too afraid to break free,
yet afraid if I stay, my life won't last.

Words I can't tell you,
i'm sorry is all I speak.
As I fall into doomsville,
shallow, and putrid, and weak.
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Comments: 3

cheechwood [2007-09-25 06:09:57 +0000 UTC]

This kind of emotion left me with some pretty bad scars my self. For myself it was the loss of my first young love. It's insane because when things get this bad you forget that it does get better. Pretty good work.

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TearsOfTorment [2006-07-17 13:21:16 +0000 UTC]

The emotion is raw in this poem. Great work.

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Angelize In reply to TearsOfTorment [2006-07-17 18:42:25 +0000 UTC]

thanks hun.

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