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Published: 2012-05-03 01:37:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 281; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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You'll learn soon enough, young grasshopper.
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you should have totally said young grasshopper
Beautiful work, as always, my dear.
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Why did everyone comment on that?
Thanks, m'dear. I had to cut out two lines, though. I couldn't stand formatting anymore.
Remind me to never try to work hard again.
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Oh, poop. I don't think an extra two lines would've killed ya, sweet heart.
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Well, I accidentally skipped them. And then when I noticed I was like: Well fuck that.
I'll just give the whole thing to you now:
Rhyming doesnβt make a poem, any better than before.
Rhyming doesnβt make the words into something more.
What matters is the content.
Thatβs what gets more praise.
Hard work comes out of weeks, or at least a couple days.
Although some make it look easy,
I find itβs rather not.
You canβt just spill out some words hot on the spot.
It wonβt ever make an impact,
Or go very far,
If the words donβt have a meaning
Or a moral,
Or Form.
And yes, call me a hypocrite.
For all my rhyming ways,
But Iβll have you know, young student,
That this poem took me days.
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THIS POEM, I LIKE IT.
ANOTHER!
pffft, thor.
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Poetry is hard....
THOR?
Speaking of thor, when are we going to the movie?
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Next Friday, I believe.
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Thanks...I suppose.
But why so stundere? That's my job.
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