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Published: 2003-08-20 03:55:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 100; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 9
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Two years ago I met you,Om a night that was so dark.
That eve a friendship grew,
Kindled by a tiny little spark.
Over years well spent,
That spark grew to a flame.
If only you knew how much you ment,
And i hoped that you felt the same.
Then one day, struck disaster twice.
The love of years left you alone.
Your's transformed to a heart of ice,
Mine to a heart of stone.
Time of crisis brought us together,
And that flame melted the ice.
The sun is out in this fair weather,
And you, in my arms, I hold.
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sumdude [2003-08-20 03:59:34 +0000 UTC]
"The love of years left you alone.
Your's transformed to a heart of ice,
Mine to a heart of stone."
Really had an effect.
Really good, i think your teachers on crack. I would have given that an A+.
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4got10 [2003-08-20 03:59:33 +0000 UTC]
i like it shows endurance, and it's very descript. good poem you shoould have got a 20.
there is a reason for being - checkout my poetry
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