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animewidgit — I Hold the Key to My Escape
Published: 2003-08-24 16:27:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 105; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 14
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Trapped in this state,There's no escape.
Thoughs constant,
Oh...to be real.
Reliving, re-enacting.
Maybe, if i stay like this,
I'd never have to live.
Voluntaly prisoner
In a heavenly hell
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A heavenly hell? Maybe an explanation is needed here... I agree that two opposites can sometimes show great emotion and give wonderful depth to a poem, but oyu must be the first who has dared to go near heaven and hell to do this like you just did... I may have missed the meaning.
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well, this was inspired by a bad relationhip that i was in, and i was wishing for the old times, u know "the good old days". but i wouldn't let go of those thoughs and in not doing so, i plummeted myself into a mental hell cause by wonderful thoughs.
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THis is far too vague to the avergae reader with no insight to your thoughts... make yourself more clear.......... crytal clear... or just insult my work.
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thank you for you're comments, but this poem was not written for public view. i wrote it for myself, and i like mine to be a bit on the vague side.
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why are you picking a fight on an art site? i wrote this long before i ever even heard of the site, but decided to let ppl c it. i didn't let ne one c my poems for quite a while, but change my mind. whats wrong w/ that? i'm not going to change them around b/c ppl c them now.
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I'm not picking a fight with you, im picking a fight with your art. I hope that if i notice the bad in someone elses art then maybe they will show me the bad side of my art, very few people do though. You hsould maybe explain it more clearly if your art is so personal that you dont want a critque. DA was designed for work to be critiqued and improved, not just flaunted around like most do.
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i'm not against it being critiqued. its the fact that these latest poems that i posted mean alot to me. it was the way i found to express my hurt. maybe u struck a nerve. i wrote it the way i did for a reason, and perhaps you just don't like my style. if not, thats fine.
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Ok, I'm sorry if i stuck a nerve.... i just assume anything thats on DA is to be critiqued honestly and by that i think leave out all compliments and only criticise..... hell! leave everyone else to the compliments... this is no popularity contesst!
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:-P yes, you have a point, and i'll sift through ur stuff and c if i can find some ways of improvment
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Now, thats more like it! we got there in the end didn't we!
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He really isn't picking a fight; just voicing an opinion. I see where both of you are coming from with this.
Anyway, I digress, the poem is good, although as that corrupted angel over there said, a little vague not that that's always a bad thing. Well done anyway
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thank you for you're andvice, and i'll keep it in mind for the future
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