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This would make quite the dating sim.~
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Good work!
I like the colors and the shading of the characters.
I'm not sure on the bg. It could have more varied colors, but at the same time, a simple tones like the ones used make the characters look more colorful.
Maybe it could have more drop shadows from the characters? also, more shading for the teapot and cups.
The lamp has a nice graphic style, although a more realistic approach could have worked too.
I like the expressions of the girls too.
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thanks for the critique!
in truth, nightscapes are always tricky for me. light sources seem very different and shadows stick too much
with this work im more prepared to take on night scenes better
yes the bg was meant to make the characters pop - if you observe the lines though, i think it was a bad decision to make the bg lines thicker than my character lines. shouting as they call it in landscape, i'll make it better next time
nods, the shadows... TTvTT)/
i guess a personal experience with european lamps is what i need. we dont have those anymore in our country. the spanish streets used solid frames lamps (in our region)
thanks for appreciating
the larger version has been posted by the commissioner - visit them too!
*hugs
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You're welcome!
Yes, characters usually have thicker lines compared to backgrounds. And if something is receding in the bg, the lines are thinner.
Here are some street lamps in that style:
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I saw that one too.
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thanks for appreciating!
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This is incredible. n_n
Very well done, Ani! It's so bright and colorful
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TTvTT)/
hit me soon okay~
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Alright.
*Hits with a magical girl wand*
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ouch!
...
...
do not talk to me
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D:
S_sorry, you asked me to hit you!...
;_;
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I'm sooooooooooorry!Β ;3;
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I don't know if I like the look they're giving me... >_>
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Love it. Could be a scene straight out of a game.
In fact, I almost expect a text box to pop up on the bottom of the screen.
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*pops a text box
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you cant save the game though
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B) I'll take my chances.
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goodness
btw
im opening commissions.
if ever
hit me!
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Oh no, I'm not falling for that one.
I saw how you turned things around on Shin!
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