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Published: 2008-07-24 03:03:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 313; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 5
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I've always wanted to do one of these, and I'm actually pretty impressed with how it came out. A couple of the poses were referenced (because I suck) but a lot of it was all me.From left to right these are my characters from my 2007 NaNoWriMo which I have decided to call Kino for lack of a better title at this time. First is Lieutenant Raze Clarks (who if any of you remember his original design that I hated, has been redone. I like him better now.) Raze is turning into one of my favorite characters after some re-thinking and planning with a good friend.
Lastly we have Lieutenant Faye Marks. She gets her own paragraph because she was the one that gave me the most trouble. I finished the other three (Ryen, then Clarien, then Raze) in just one evening, and then spent the next week and a half trying to finish her. I'm not kidding. I must have drawn her at least two dozen times (on this paper and others combined) before I somehow, miraculously, finally pulled her off today when I was at work. I don't know what was so special about today that allowed me to finally finish the picture. Oh well. Isn't art funny like that?
So, now I have a semi-completed piece. If you'll notice - there is a lack of lines between the drawings. I can't draw a straight line to save my life, thus I kind of erased the erratic lines that I had in there at one point. So - you guessed it - I'm going to ink and color! Weee! I didn't like my last colored piece at all, so I hope that I can change the things that I didn't like. We shall see.
Characters and art are completely mine and I will hunt you down if you steal any part of this. However, comments and critique are completely welcomed and much appreciated!
ETA August 1, 2009: Didn't need this in my gallery with the colored version as well.
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Comments: 16
Annerb In reply to PriestNeftis [2008-07-26 05:17:24 +0000 UTC]
Awww!! ^^ Thank you so much! And I appreciate the fave!!!
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Annerb In reply to mizutaka [2008-07-24 05:09:35 +0000 UTC]
Really??? *squee* I'm so glad!! (and you really think Faye looks alright? Something about her still bugs me)
Oh - and by the way: you're totally lame for obviously being online despite it only being 11 and haven't called me back. . .
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mizutaka In reply to Annerb [2008-07-24 05:16:51 +0000 UTC]
I'm not lame! >_< As according to phone message!
Yes. She's my favorite.
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phonet [2008-07-24 04:52:46 +0000 UTC]
I really love their expressions in this picture; even though you asked for an advanced critique I am far too tired to do that.
I would love to see it colored.
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Annerb In reply to phonet [2008-07-24 05:05:23 +0000 UTC]
Well thanks for the thought on an advanced critique anyway! And I'm glad that you noticed the expressions! (That was one of my problems on drawing Faye.)
Thanks for everything!
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phonet In reply to Annerb [2008-07-27 20:55:21 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome. Faye is a great name.
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Annerb In reply to phonet [2008-07-28 08:07:57 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I was considering renaming her, but I'll consider keeping it now.
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Annerb In reply to phonet [2008-08-05 05:09:10 +0000 UTC]
Oh you should. Most definitely. . .
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phonet In reply to Annerb [2008-08-11 19:59:53 +0000 UTC]
Why did I say null? WTF, Phonet, WTF.
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