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Published: 2011-02-05 12:05:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 6399; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 5468
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My first real poem! So be nice to me people I don't want any mean critics alrightI used one of my old photos as background
I hopw you like this one : 3
Art and poem (c) Ailwyn Raydom
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Comments: 22
AnnietheGreenKitty In reply to Gigicom [2011-05-22 17:29:05 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much, Im so happie you like it 8D <3
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Emz-Artcorner [2011-02-10 09:43:02 +0000 UTC]
Ett mycket rΓΆrande litet poem, gumman, ett mycket bra fΓΆrsta fΓΆrsΓΆk utan tvekan!
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AnnietheGreenKitty In reply to Emz-Artcorner [2011-02-10 21:07:15 +0000 UTC]
aww tack sΓ₯ jΓ€tte mycket vΓ€nnen
<3
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AnnietheGreenKitty In reply to Moon-Phantom [2011-02-07 18:08:19 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much =3
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AnnietheGreenKitty In reply to EvyCrystal [2011-02-07 18:08:12 +0000 UTC]
thanks a lot hun
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ThaIssing [2011-02-05 17:43:09 +0000 UTC]
it's a lot better than my poems, mine are just silly orz
I like this poem, it makes me Γn a good mood somehow o:
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AnnietheGreenKitty In reply to ThaIssing [2011-02-05 17:46:59 +0000 UTC]
I have never done a real poem before, so thank you.
It means very much to me you like it. And don't worry
Im sure your poems are good too. Sometimes poems are
just meant for yourself to make yourself better in a
situation and it's a bonus people like it.
So thanks again ^^
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ThaIssing In reply to AnnietheGreenKitty [2011-02-05 17:55:56 +0000 UTC]
np
I had one friend who really likes the one i did she still says part of it know and then. but really it was silly, it was about cookies orz
whole other thing, if this is your first real poem, I would like to see what other poems you make would be like :3
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AnnietheGreenKitty In reply to ThaIssing [2011-02-05 18:02:22 +0000 UTC]
hehe I think a poem is never to silly.
It's to personal and it's a reflection of yourself.
It's more silly if you just write something you
don't trust on just do it for get attention.
And thats a diffrence. Im sure you not one searching for that
I hope you make your poems for your own joy.
But Im glad your fried like it too.
Heheh aww maybe I will do more later XD when I feel I got
something i want to write down ; 3
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ThaIssing In reply to AnnietheGreenKitty [2011-02-05 18:08:27 +0000 UTC]
actually, I was forced to do it by my teacher. But I had fun when writing it.
that's also import to wait for it, or it gets a bit silly like mine and not serius like yours XD
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AnnietheGreenKitty In reply to ThaIssing [2011-02-05 18:41:32 +0000 UTC]
Aw hun don't say like that
Im sure next time when you make it when
yourself want to. Im sure it will be much
better
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AnnietheGreenKitty In reply to Fire-Link [2011-02-05 17:30:14 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much.
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AnnietheGreenKitty In reply to sheenathehedgehog [2011-02-05 17:30:30 +0000 UTC]
thanks a lot ^^
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sheenathehedgehog In reply to AnnietheGreenKitty [2011-02-05 20:01:08 +0000 UTC]
you're welcome
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