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Description Once Hina was in the hallway, her hands returned to their initial duty of guarding her intimates.  Not that it would do much good.  It was plainly obviously she was completely naked.  Her heart raced as she looked around the hallway.  Although Hina couldn’t immediately see anyone nearby, she could hear voices.  The hallway was not a hiding spot.

Hina’s legs felt like jelly as she tried to take a step forward.  She had to move.  Staying there by the door would lead to her getting found.  

Her goal was the stairs.  The elevator was out of the question.  She lacked anything to hide her nudity, and there would be no telling what was on the other side.

That was the upside of the stairs.  No surprises.  Only… which way were they?  Hina really hadn’t explored the ship fully.  If she wasn’t careful, she could get lost.

Still, Hina couldn’t afford to just slow down.  She picked a hallway that was giving the fewest sounds and-

“Eep!”  Hina gasped and doubled right back.  A man pushing a food cart was approaching.  He was likely room service.

Red faced and covering herself, Hina went in a different direction, where the elevators were.  Unfortunately, there were more voices in that direction, which of course, meant more people.

Hina poked her head around the corner at the end of the hallway.  The squeaky wheels of the cart warned her of impending discovery.  

There was a small lobby where two people were waiting for an elevator.  Just two.  Could Hina sneak past them?  Her eyes found their way to the vending machines.  Next to them was a chair and a potted plant.  It was small… but Hina could hide there!

The naked brunette looked behind her and saw the food cart turning the corner.  She wasn’t going to get to wait for the right opportunity.  Hina took a deep breath, clung to her chest and started a quick dash to that chair.  

Hina frantically pulled the chair out, and got behind it.  She quickly sat down, pulling her legs into her chest.  Between a chair, a vending machine, and a potted plant, Hina could only hope she would go undiscovered.  

Her heart was racing.  She was trying to control her heavier breathing as she hugged her chest.  Those people would notice something was wrong if they saw the chair was out of place, or heard her move it.

“Did you hear something?”  said one of them.

“I thought I heard somone run by…”  replied the other.

‘Oh God, they heard me!’  thought Hina.  She was going to get discovered.  It was over.

Ding!

“Hm?  Well whatever,” said the first person.  

Hina peeked from behind the chair while staying low and saw the two get inside the elevator.  The door shut.

The naked girl sighed with relief.  For the moment she was safe.  Hina looked over her obvious nakedness.  She thought about how this was her own fault, how she only wanted to indulge just a little bit.  Instead, she got a lot more than she bargained for.  

A squeaking sound of a food cart approached, making Hina tense up again.  Someone was close by, likely that food service guy.  Hina held her breath, and tried to hold herself as tightly as possible, liking trying to roll up into a little ball.

Eventually, the squeaking wheels started to seem quieter as they continued down the hall.  Hina was alone in her little alcove.  She let out a silent exhale, and sat there to rest her mind for a moment.  

The elevator was right there by her.  It was starting to sound like the more logical option, given that it was closer and Hina didn’t really know which way the stairs were.  Still, there was the issue of the door opening to a mystery.  

Hina thought it over, deciding to wait.  If the elevator seemed inactive enough, she’d use it.  As she sat there, she felt her own skin.  The adrenaline rushes made her feel a bit sensitive.  Between the legs she was very warm.  The kind of warmth that suggested she was enjoying this.

The brunette shook her head.  ‘No, no, no,’ she thought.  ‘I can’t think about that.  Not here, not now.’

After waiting for what felt like a long time, Hina looked at the elevator.  The light display above it hadn’t changed.  It hadn’t dinged in a while, meaning it hadn’t seen much use over the last few minutes.

Every moment that passed made Hina think, that she was wasting time that she could successfully get to her floor.  The longer she waited, the more she put herself at risk.

Hina then decided she shouldn’t wait longer than she needed to.  It was time to go.  On shaking legs, she rose up, and climbed over the chair.  The smooth fabric of the chair brushed against her skin.  She hugged her chest, looked around, and pushed a button to call the elevator.

The little light display illuminated.  There was a little hum, and the elevator was approaching.

It dinged, and the door opened.

Hina braced herself and prepared to scream, but heard nothing.  Nobody was in the elevator.  Of course there wasn’t, she was the one who called it.  So, Hina ran in and pressed the button to her floor.  The door shut, and the elevator began to move.

For the third time Hina rode the elevator.  First she created the illusion of nudity.  Then she was hiding actual nudity.  Now, those reflective walls showed she could do very little to conceal her naked form.  Every curve was free of her clingy swimsuit.  Every inch was exposed without the towel to hide it.  Her nakedness was in plain sight now.

Her plan was set.  Once that door was open, it was going to be a quick sneak back to her room.  If anyone saw her, it would turn to a mad dash.  The naked brunette watched the light display showing her approaching her floor.  It felt like an eternity, but it wasn’t even a whole minute.

Hina took a deep breath, feeling her pulse pick up.  The elevator stopped moving, it dinged and the door opened.

With nobody immediately near the door, Hina poked her head out to see the unoccupied alcove.  Luck was on her side.  The exposed girl slowly stepped out, and was thankful the hallways were silent.  

She started to quickly walk, retracing her steps back to her room.  The nightmare was almost over.  Hina could finally get redressed, and lay in bed.  She had enough excitement for one day, after all.  

The halls were clear, and nothing was slowing her down.  The door to Hina’s room was in sight.  Safety at last!  Hina’s quick walk turned into a run, causing her breasts to bounce as she passed each door of the floor.  They all had a chance of opening, of having someone walk out and see Hina completely nude.  But her goal was ahead of her!

Finally, the naked brunette reached her door.  She quickly gripped the handle and pushed.  But the door didn’t open.  It was locked.

“Oh right that stupid…. key…”  Hina’s heart sank.  She didn’t have her room key on her.  It was on the deck near the pool, where she lost her swimsuit to begin with.  With her legs feeling like jelly, Hina put her hands on the wall and almost panicked.  

“Oh God… oh God… I can’t get in…”  Hina said out loud to herself.  There was no way inside without a key.  This wasn’t a lock she could pick, not that she knew how.  And it would definitely draw attention if she tried to bash it open, not that she had the strength to do so.  No, Hina would need her room key to open this door.  And if she didn’t want to expose herself to anyone that worked aboard the ship, that meant going back up.

Hina mentally prepared herself for another naked walk.  The elevator seemed safe enough, even though she didn’t completely trust it.  She managed to use it without running into anyone, though who knows if the situation changed?

Once she approached the alcove where the elevator was, she heard something that sent a shiver up her spine.  

Ding!

It could only mean someone was using the elevator!  Where they coming or going?  If they were coming, they would see Hina!

In her panic, she thought to turn back and try clawing through her door.  But instead Hina froze up and held herself, backside to the wall.  She closed her eyes in worry.  

But… she heard nothing.  Hina slowly poked her head around the corner, and saw nobody in the alcove.  Whoever it was, was getting on the elevator.  That meant it was in use, but at least Hina had been undiscovered.  

Hina thought about waiting on the elevator.  She knew the way from it, to the pool.  However, she did remember that path being very busy.  Maybe the stairs could present a better option.  But could she dare to search for them?

The naked girl looked down each way of the hallway.  Would the stairs be far?  Less people would be using them given the size of the ship.  Getting to the stairs was riskier, but once she got there, the stairs themselves would be a safer path.  

Hina hugged her chest and pushed her legs together.  She picked the path that lead away from her room, and started walking.  Her heart was pounding as she wandered, remembering she was without so much as a thread.  If anyone was in these halls, she’d be exposed to them.  

A door opened along the hall behind her.  Hina froze and slowly looked behind her.

There were two girls walking out of the door.  One with very light colored hair, the other with blue hair.  

“C’mon June, it’ll be fun,” said the first girl.

Hina’s eyes widened.  Was this the two from before!?

“Can you at least make sure it’s clear first?”  replied June.

“Oh fine you-” Aria froze, looking square at Hina.

Hina’s eyes widened in horror as her biggest fear was realized.

“EEEEK!”  The brunette gave a squeal.  She turned and started to run.

‘I was seen.  I was seen.  I was seen…. she saw me.  She saw me naked.’  Hina thought with a deep blush.

Aria stood in the doorway to her and June’s room, appearing somewhat dumbfounded.  “I wonder if she’s doing this on purpose or not….”  She said as she scratched her head.

Run!  Run run run run!  It was all Hina could think about doing.  Somebody knew she was naked on this ship now!  She sprinted down the hallway, but stopped.  Hina looked behind her and saw the stairs, she had nearly ran right past them!

Thinking those two could be following her, Hina quickly started to climb the steps.  With three flights to climb before she reached the swimming deck, Hina had to think of a way to get around them, if she encountered them again.

Hina didn’t even read the girl’s expression.  In her mind, she needed to get some cover before the crew of the ship started looking for a nudist.

Further and further up Hina went.  She was starting to wonder if it would be right to steal a towel from the top deck.  If the ship provided towels it wouldn’t be a big deal.  There had to be some by the pool.

Once Hina reached the top of the stairs, she took a moment to catch her breath.  As she hoped, the stairs didn’t see much use, and the door lead directly to the pool area.  However, as she was worried about, there were a lot of people on the swimming deck.  

Hina glanced around and saw the hut by the end of the ship.  Her key card was likely over there. Now if only she could spot… a towel rack!

It was a bit far away, but Hina could see a towel rack near the end of the ship, completely full of towels!  It seemed free for anyone to take one, and Hina would be all too happy to help herself to one, maybe even two.  

The only issue was, it was a bit far away, as the towel rack was near the hut.  There was no easy way to get to it.  Hina would be seen going for it for sure if she just walked for it.  But she had to find a way over there, she needed coverage!

Along the handrail that lead to the back, there were multiple lounge chairs, and many people tanning on them.  If she was quiet enough… she might be able to sneak by them.  

Red faced, the naked girl knew she had to take this chance.  She slowly crept towards the handrail out into the sunlight.  It hugged her naked skin and warmed her.  A small comfort, but it did nothing to help her challenge.  

She got on her hands and knees and began to crawl forward.  It was a small space between the back of the lounge chairs and the handrail, but Hina could fit.  She bit her lip, feeling the warmth between her legs at the risk of exposure.  Getting past each chair felt like it took forever, due to how much of a risk she was taking.

“Mmm…”  came a sigh.

Hina froze and looked behind her, seeing a woman rolling over to her front side and resting her head.  The woman was wearing sunglasses, so there was no way Hina could tell if she was looking at her completely exposed backside or not.  

The nude brunette did her best not to scream, but could help but put a hand between her legs and crawl on.  She was very hot and bothered now, which was strange.  Was she being turned on by the thought of being seen like this?  No, she couldn’t.  She enjoyed naked exploring, that was different.

Hina shook her head.  ‘No, no, no!’  She thought.  ‘I don’t enjoy that either!  I am not some crazy exhibitionist!  Gotta get that towel!’

Closer and closer, soon Hina was at the very end of lounge chair line.  A few feet away was the towel rack.  She couldn’t reach it from the feeble safety of the lounge chair.  

She looked around, seeing everyone enjoying the pool.  It was now or never, she’d only be completely exposed for a few seconds.  That towel was all she needed.

Hina took a deep breath, and crawled out from behind the lounge chair, and did a little dash to the towel rack.  She made a quick grab and ran for the hut.  

She heard splashes and laughs, but nobody gasping.  Hina didn’t care either way.  Once she was behind the hut, she was safe.  There was fabric in her hand!  It seemed fluffy and soft with a high quality material.  The fabric was warmed by the sun.  The naked girl could not wait to have this securely wrapped around her body!

And so Hina smiled and unraveled the towel, held it in place over one of her breasts, pulled it around her back to cover it.  She finally had cover!  But as Hina looked at her comfortable fabric, she realized something.

This towel was too short.

Worry returned to Hina, as she tugged and pulled the fabric further, but it wouldn’t reach below her hips, leaving her bottom half completely exposed.  Was this meant for someone’s hair?  Or a child?  Whatever the , it wasn’t enough!  Hina would have to brave getting one more towel.

Hina peeked around the corner, and saw the towel rack again.  The naked girl had only one way to make this towel cover everything.  That was to hold it vertically, which would cover her breasts and between her legs, but left her backside completely exposed.  

She blushed, and made a slow, nervous walk towards the towel rack from the hut.  Hina’s heart was racing as she make her careful steps, keeping the towel facing the pool, and the naked curves of her backside facing the rest of the world behind her.  

‘This towel is all I have,’ Hina thought.  ‘If I don’t keep it in place, everyone will see I’m naked.  Just a little closer… almost…’  Hina glanced towards the towel rack.  Finally she snatched one and turned, making a quick dash towards the back of the hut again.  

Her hasty movement cost her, however, as the towel covering her front was free to flutter about.  The bouncing breasts were revealed to the world briefly before Hina made it back.

She sighed, breathlessly.  Hina wiped a little sweat off her forehead, and wrapped the towels around her naked body.  She was able to cover both her top and bottom to her liking.  

“Finally… time to get out of this,” Hina said out loud.  She slowly walked to where she tanned, and sure enough, her lounge chair and room key were still in place.  

Hina picked it up off of the ground, and gripped it tight.  She wasn’t going to lose this again.  It was time to head back to her room, and address a certain “itch.”

Although she was nervous the whole way back, Hina managed to keep her composure.  She got a few odd looks from other passengers on the ship, but Hina paid them no mind.  There wasn’t much reason to, and she wasn’t likely to meet them again after the cruise was done.  

There was a brief incident where her bottom towel fell off in the elevator, but luckily she had made sure to ride alone and was able to fix it.  

Hina made her way down the final hallway, slid her key card into her door, and finally, gained access to her room.  She slowly walked in, shut the door behind her, and exhaled.

Then, in an instant, her towels were thrown to the floor and Hina laid on her bed, with her hands going between her legs.  The pent up arousal from her misadventure was done being polite when it came to asking her hands for a touch.

Hina was ashamed at how suddenly she did it, but without a doubt, she needed this relief.  The naked girl furiously rubbed between her legs, feeling the heat on her hand.  She curled her toes and her body stiffened as she let out a moan.  The naked girl shook in tension, before her muscles relaxed and she collapsed face down on her bed.

When Hina opened her eyes, she felt very relaxed and could only smile.  With the entire endeavor, only two people had truly known she was naked.  It was over, she was safe.  It was enough adventures for one day,  Hina would get dressed an-

Knock Knock

That sound alarmed Hina, causing her to sit up.  Who could be knocking on her door?

Another knocking on Hina’s door went by.  With no time to dress, Hina scrambled for a towel on the floor and wrapped it around herself.  It was the larger of the two towels, just big enough to cover everything.

Hina then looked through the eye hole of the door, and saw the two girls from earlier.  Aria and June.  They were the ones that saw her.

Hina opened the door a crack and looked at them.  “H-hello?”

“Hey there, I think we saw you earlier.  Mind if we come in?”  Aria said with a smile.

“N-no, I’m not dressed.”  Hina said, telling a bit of truth.

“That wasn’t a problem earlier,” Aria winked.

“Th-that’s not what you think it was!  Please don’t tell anyone, that was an accident, I was-”

“Shh!  We’re not gonna tell on you.”  June said, with a little blush of her own.  Hina noticed that June was wearing a very light bikini, the pieces were barely big enough to cover essentials.

“It’s fine if you’re taking a break,” Aria said.  “Just wanted to say it’s amazing how bold you were!”

“W-what?  No I’m not…”

“Couldn’t wait for midnight, huh?  We couldn’t either!”  Aria said.

“M-midnight?”  Hina said in confusion and embarrassment.  These girls thought she did that on purpose?  That was…. only partially true.  But what did Aria mean about midnight?

“You mean you don’t know?”  Aria said in surprise.  “Well, at Midnight, we’ll be in International Waters.  That’s when they lighten up on the rules if you like to sneak around.”  Aria said with a sly wink.  “Which we were going to do.  You’re welcome to join us if you like!  I’m Aria, and this is June!”

Hina stared at Aria for a long time, feeling a bit nervous.  Finally she said, “Nice to meet you, I’m Hina….I kind of just want to rest right now, maybe I’ll see you two later.”

“Okay!”  Aria said.  “We’re in room Two Fifty Eight!”

The brunette slowly shut her door, and sat back down on her bed, thinking about what Aria explained to her.  Thankfully, she wasn’t in trouble, but she couldn’t help but wonder what Aria seemed to hint at.

Did this ship had a streaker night?
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Comments: 20

okwiefunktioniertdas [2023-01-04 10:20:37 +0000 UTC]

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anonenffan In reply to okwiefunktioniertdas [2023-01-04 21:47:14 +0000 UTC]

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okwiefunktioniertdas In reply to anonenffan [2023-01-04 23:35:29 +0000 UTC]

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L0ngb0at [2019-11-08 10:33:46 +0000 UTC]

Good ending  i like how light harted it was with arie and june.

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PrinceBuffoon [2018-06-24 09:16:08 +0000 UTC]

And a great finisher! This was perhaps a tad longer than it needed to be, but every bit of it was still quite enjoyable, and the pacing continues to take unexpected twists and turns. The hunt for one towel turning into a need for two towels felt a little tacked on, otherwise I really thought everything was great!


I did spot a couple of missing words:


but could help but put a hand between her legs and crawl on. - couldn't help?

No, she couldn’t.  She enjoyed naked exploring, that was different. - couldn't be?

Whatever the , it wasn’t enough! - Whatever the case?

Did this ship had a streaker night? - have a streaker night?


Other than those, the flow stayed nice and solid throughout. I can see why you're satisfied with this story, you really deliver on the cruise ship premise! Bravo!

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anonenffan In reply to PrinceBuffoon [2018-06-25 03:24:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for the comment, Buff!  This indeed comes from a time when I was less refined, but also a little more reckless in how I wrote.  Writing that way comes with a risk, but when it pays off, there's good results. 


Wanting to create a cruise ship story is actually part of why I ended up being a writer.  It was a setting I wanted to see used, but there wasn't much interest, even among writers that took requests. 

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Bladeninja76 [2017-03-27 15:00:51 +0000 UTC]

Wow, she actually decided to go back for her key? I would have sank in shock, given up on modesty and revealed my terrified, naked self to an employee. Love that she was seen, and then with the sunglasses woman who may or may not have seen her crawling behind. Butt (pun intended) I like that it had a happy ending, and LOL at the international waters!

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anonenffan In reply to Bladeninja76 [2017-03-28 01:30:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for the comments!  I'm glad you enjoyed my story!

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ANewENFArtist [2015-10-16 09:29:14 +0000 UTC]

Great job Anon, very fun story. Hina is a load of fun to read about always as her bad lucks leads her on these fun adventures she can't seem to bring herself to truly hate ;3

I do worry for poor June just what Aria may convince her to do, specially when June won't have legalities to back her up XP

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anonenffan In reply to ANewENFArtist [2015-10-16 15:56:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks anew

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crayle2 [2015-10-12 22:57:02 +0000 UTC]

You did a wonderful job of maintaining the tension throughout, from her gradually getting naked, to her losing the towel, and you kept the Embarrassment level high as well.

And the Sauna scene was truly steamy!

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anonenffan In reply to crayle2 [2015-10-13 00:52:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks you!

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Misayaka [2015-10-11 23:53:09 +0000 UTC]

This was fun, but I liked the tension of part 1 more. She gets off pretty light. (pun not intended )

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anonenffan In reply to Misayaka [2015-10-12 01:19:06 +0000 UTC]

Part 1 had it's close calls for sure ^^  I'm always a bit friendly to my characters.  It may seem a bit silly, but it's just what I do.

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Misayaka In reply to anonenffan [2015-10-13 01:52:42 +0000 UTC]

Oh no, it's totally cool, I am too. Just saying.>>

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InoueNinja094 [2015-10-11 17:39:38 +0000 UTC]

Awemose ending for an awesome story

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anonenffan In reply to InoueNinja094 [2015-10-12 01:17:20 +0000 UTC]

Awesome comment!

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ROCuevas [2015-10-11 16:17:05 +0000 UTC]

This was awesome. XD

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anonenffan In reply to ROCuevas [2015-10-12 01:17:08 +0000 UTC]

It is awesome

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ROCuevas In reply to anonenffan [2015-10-12 01:34:38 +0000 UTC]

Yep.

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