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Published: 2012-11-21 14:53:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 14363; Favourites: 1757; Downloads: 118
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This poem describes me completely. I have a strange obsession with sugar, and... I don't need to explain the rest.((NOTE: I didn't write this poem. This was just a piece of typography. All credit to the original author.
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the last line's about slitting wrists, which suicidal people often do when they feel they aren't ready to actually kill themselves.
i actually was interesting in where the poem was going until that line.
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Ahhh, okay xD I didn't really take the time to interpret that *rolls eyes* silly me ^v^ I was too, I liked the turn around but I still agree with kiseli on the fact that life can't be THAT bad. I heard a similar poem that went like this: Roses are red, I hate you. Die. (well that escalated quickly xD) I like this one better: Roses are red, that much is true, but violets are purple, not effin' blue. (True, true...)
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haha. yeah. i'm just kind of thinking the author is still young and hasn't learned better yet. everyone feels like that in middle school or high school.
you're totally right about violets though, but i guess it's like orange juice is actually yellow (at least it's made of oranges).
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Yeah xD And it's true because when I was going through middle school, I was having the very same thoughts but I didn't kill myself, I thought about it, I planned it out, but I didn't cut nor did I actually do anything related to suicide and life is really good right now ^^ So I'm glad I didn't do anything
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yeah, seems like it happens a lot to middle school kids, especially those in the art crowd like most da users.
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I imagine most artists as quiet people who speak through art rather than words so maybe the reason we get bullied is because we can't defend ourselves yeah I have no idea where I'm going with this xD Then again, I HAVE changed...a LOT, so....yeah....
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tends to be that way, though not always of course. there are the artists who are very extroverted and would be deemed normal, even acceptable by society.
haha. i don't know what i'm saying either, but even the quiet ones will defend themselves if pushed enough.
everyone has their own issues that they tend to purge through art.
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Yup, that seems right x3 "everyone has their own issues they tend to purge through art"
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Although you were a little more brash about it, I cant help but agree to a certain extent. Some people are just so self absorbed with themselves that they ignore everything else around them and lose all perceptions of what good they have, and how much worse they could have it. I wouldn't hope Dexter finds them, but if someone REALLY wants to end their life then feel free do so and dont continue a half-assed life dragging everyone down with you.
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Alright, you dont like it, dont f*cking see it.
I mean, for God's sake! This is just a poem! Its decision of the person to keep living or not. Yes it is kind of stupid, but its not your choice to critisize it or judge it. Like you said, "GO ON", dont stop so you can judge another person's work or poetry.
Dont like it, dont see it, you hate it, dont demonstrate it.
Cheers, hater!
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Oy, everyone's got a right to have and voice his or her opinion. Rudeness will bite peeps in the ass, but they've got a choice to be rude or courteous. We're not in kindergarten anymore.
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Lol, if you like only positive opinions, you maybe have a problem. Didnt want to judge you, or something like taking your freedom, god forbid, im just sayin, this poem has a stupid message. Thats all. And if someone feels like they have to end their life because of some poor love, i think that thats stupid.
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Thank you, I wasn't going to say anything but all of your posts just made me nod.
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Well, for you it is! For others this is a nice poem, for some it has a message, for others it just has a good rhyme. I'm not always expecting positive opinions, nor there will be always negative.
You like Romeo and Juliet? Or you read it? Seen it?
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Read it, seen it. I have opinion on that also, but something tells me you're not gonna like it.
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ok thats mean. dont wish people to die that makes you as bad as the rest who have made them want to harm themselves.
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hey, hold your guns lady, this poem is a obvious humorous one. Dark comedy all the way.
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In that case, the saddest part of this poem is the line about empty sugarbowl.
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yes, itΒ΄s like the "First World problems" meme.
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Let people live how they want - don't wish them death.
You are free to say your opinion, sure, but some words were completely unnecessary here.
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Nice feel-good moment you got there.
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That is such a cute little poem.
I wouldn't add anything to it, it's perfect the way it is c:
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First I was like: How sweet!
But I then was like: Feels bad man.
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hahaha very good, feels like a Wednesday Addams poem 
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