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This poem describes me completely. I have a strange obsession with sugar, and... I don't need to explain the rest.((NOTE: I didn't write this poem. This was just a piece of typography. All credit to the original author.
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Comments: 328
anonymousnekodos In reply to ??? [2012-12-09 06:24:30 +0000 UTC]
That would scare whoever I was giving it to xD
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Lexi-Beth [2012-11-26 23:38:03 +0000 UTC]
...Well, THAT escalated quickly. But oh so true. Love it. And you have really pretty handwriting.
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anonymousnekodos In reply to egailiute [2012-11-24 14:12:45 +0000 UTC]
Well, this isn't the exact poem, and I've already had a look around, and they ALL state different authors D: So I'll just credit the "original author".
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sanguis-est-ubique [2012-11-22 06:17:49 +0000 UTC]
Wow, i love it. It's a very great twist on the poem.
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diamond-flutist [2012-11-22 03:38:09 +0000 UTC]
Put a quite a creepy twist at the end of the poem there. I really wasn't expecting that!
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EternalBarrel [2012-11-22 02:52:56 +0000 UTC]
As poetry, this is hilariously bad to the point of being a pretty brilliant parody of bad poetry. Of course, you didn't write it, so... nice handwriting, I guess?
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anonymousnekodos In reply to EternalBarrel [2012-11-22 02:54:34 +0000 UTC]
Personally, I quite like this piece, but yes. Thank you for actually noticing my handwriting xD I actually meant for this to be typography.
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Sassycat2 [2012-11-22 02:25:21 +0000 UTC]
Whoa, whoa, whoa. Are you...are you hurting yourself? Please stop, it does no good. You are incredibly important to this world. Don't ever forget that.
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solidusgenocide [2012-11-22 01:51:43 +0000 UTC]
@Wisecrack-Idiots LOL so I was right. You're a fucking idiot well deserving of your deviant name. You lost.
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anonymousnekodos In reply to solidusgenocide [2012-11-22 01:59:38 +0000 UTC]
I respect your opinion, and I know you don't like this, but if you don't mind, can you stop saying negative things here? I'm helping myself, and I only wanted to share this piece of poetry. I'm only practising my typography, and I don't mean to offend anyone or anything. Thank you.
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solidusgenocide In reply to anonymousnekodos [2012-11-22 02:19:31 +0000 UTC]
Since you asked I will gladly stop. I am sure you know I never ment to get into this pointless debate. I will stop but...should another emo crusader reply to me then I shall return with avengence. Whahahaha. Hope you have a good night. sorry for the flood, that was unintended and I am not responsible for those asshats but still I did debate logic against fools.
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anonymousnekodos In reply to solidusgenocide [2012-11-22 02:29:09 +0000 UTC]
Alrighty then c: ((and no, contrary to most peoples opinion, I am not emo.
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solidusgenocide In reply to anonymousnekodos [2012-11-22 03:41:56 +0000 UTC]
well from the poem and the people's reaction I couldn't tell. If you wear bows in your hair or have that pink meets black thing going on then you're emo. But that's my opinion. Anyway we're good.
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anonymousnekodos In reply to solidusgenocide [2012-11-22 03:45:23 +0000 UTC]
xD yes, we're cool. And I actually don't like pink too much. Pinkie Pie is the only exception.
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solidusgenocide In reply to anonymousnekodos [2012-11-22 03:48:25 +0000 UTC]
honestly my wife likes that show. I for one like the parody videos on youtube, since a lot of people find MLP characters easy to draw there is quite a few good ones I saw the Derpy Christmas which made me laugh
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anonymousnekodos In reply to solidusgenocide [2012-11-22 04:05:03 +0000 UTC]
That's awesome! I love it when people are happy!
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Naruyumi-Mite [2012-11-21 23:31:38 +0000 UTC]
This is so beautiful...
I saw this as two things, both of which are extremely sad.
1) I saw this as murder.
2) I saw this as cutting.
Either way, this was so beautiful, I almost cried when I really looked into it.
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KaveeyarKV [2012-11-21 23:03:19 +0000 UTC]
This is a very beautiful poem, some people don't get the meaning of poetry and decide to rade in like one of the people down below. But also, if you're feeling down, I hope you feel better
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bananasandbriefcases [2012-11-21 22:59:20 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this is so beautifully crafted, I just love it. And I honestly see this as just a very well crafted piece of poetry, nothing more, nothing less.
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Soulfishh [2012-11-21 22:56:47 +0000 UTC]
I think its a great poem, but the wrist stained red part, could have been better. I don't know i feel it got a bit too intense.
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Courtney-Lehrmann [2012-11-21 22:51:23 +0000 UTC]
All of you who are saying that she is "emotional" and all need to keep your mouths shut.
A comment is supposed to be a comment and not an insult.
Also, she probably just came up with it for fun.
Not all poems are expressions.
Remember, think before you speak.
I'm sorry if I sound rude, but really.
Have some common sennse and heart.
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Needleguns In reply to Courtney-Lehrmann [2012-11-23 03:12:28 +0000 UTC]
She didn't 'come up with it' because this is not her work.
This is someone else's work that she wrote in colorful pens -.-
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vedisdragon In reply to Needleguns [2012-12-04 23:47:01 +0000 UTC]
She did state she was just practicing typography, psshhh.
HATERS GONNA HATE
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Courtney-Lehrmann In reply to Needleguns [2012-11-25 23:19:45 +0000 UTC]
Ahh, okay.
I never knew, but still.
People shouldn't insult the User. :/
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JD-Kloosterman [2012-11-21 22:50:38 +0000 UTC]
See, the second verse *I* learned as a child was more along the lines of: "The roses are wilted, the violets are too, the sugar is lumpy and your head is too." Closer to the original.
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vedisdragon In reply to JD-Kloosterman [2012-12-04 23:47:49 +0000 UTC]
How about "The roses are wilted, the violets are too, the sugar is lumpy but much less than you."
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AcornArchery [2012-11-21 22:31:53 +0000 UTC]
Cutter's have no reason to cut. It's a useless way of saying they have problems in their life that they think can be solved with rivers of their own blood. Either that, they purposely take no notice of the better things in life because they are convinced they are in a dark place. It's usually their own fault.
I'm talking from experience, most of my friends threatened to cut and did for a period of time, but because they wouldn't admit they made a stupid decision.
Take it from me guys. Cutting does nothing for you but give you a label that will only make you hurt yourself more. It's like smoking and alcohol, but even smokers and alcoholics can beat their obsession. Put down the pain and do something with your life, then you won't be able to say you mean nothing.
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VeeBunny In reply to AcornArchery [2012-11-22 07:38:00 +0000 UTC]
People sometimes cut to feel a different type of pain than the type they are feeling at the moment.
ie: Emotional pain (like stress, mental abuse or emotional trauma).
They will trade the voices in their own head for something that is a distraction and it will calm them down. They might regret it later because now they have to clean up and heal but for that moment, it helps.
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wlolvesrule15 In reply to AcornArchery [2012-11-21 22:52:30 +0000 UTC]
Different people have different ways of dealing with stress and depression, i used to burn myself, and somtimes still do( not very often) but its just their own way of dealing with it. and its their own choice and their own body.Please dont comment things like this, it may hurt peoples feelings, or offend them
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deathbysea In reply to AcornArchery [2012-11-21 22:49:49 +0000 UTC]
Are you talking about people that advertise their self-harm for the purpose of seeming a certain way? Because many don't.
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FlyingFreeFantasy In reply to AcornArchery [2012-11-21 22:48:41 +0000 UTC]
This poem may not even describe cutting. I saw it as something different completely.
You don't need to post something like this unless you 100% KNOW what you're talking about.
I don't mean to be rude- but some people may find this offensive. I, personally, don't. I agree 100%! But like I said, someone who reads this (or the person who wrote this) could get offended.
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Needleguns In reply to twinkleturtle [2012-11-23 03:13:39 +0000 UTC]
Because the dA art community hates art thieves. Oh wait, no they don't. -.-
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hae-ri [2012-11-21 20:40:23 +0000 UTC]
Roses are red
violet are blue
I am getting tired of this
and you should read the rules.
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solidusgenocide [2012-11-21 20:21:55 +0000 UTC]
generic emo bullshit. "beautiful piece of poetry"
You're an inbred who needs new meds,
but the non generics aren't covered by the feds,
so instead you rot slowly
with the weight of the world all just visions in your childish head.
And you wish you where dead.
What the triple fuck is your problem?
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Maxcube1 In reply to solidusgenocide [2012-11-22 06:08:45 +0000 UTC]
Man, you may not like the picture or the person who made it, but you don't have to be so mean about it. What the triple fuck is YOUR problem?
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