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Antarija β The Untold - part 37
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Published: 2016-03-21 15:29:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 9536; Favourites: 75; Downloads: 8
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Listen to this for more feels QAQ ('cause I fail at feels...)Yes, Deil was my first death in this run. Herdier's critical take down was too much for him. So many of you were right about it, it's almost terrifying... You clairvoyants, you.
Agh,Β and that was totally my fault. He needed just about 20 exp to evolve and I became a bit reckless. That and the fact I've played Pokemon White after a long break from Pokemon games and forgot about rangers and their camouflage. Anytime I saw a pile of moss (leaves? stones? whatever...) I was like "Ooo, what's that?". I'm a genius :I
Trivia time:
- I hate Rangers
- those birds are Wild Tranquills
- Zaira is back to normal
- it's gonna be a bit bloody run. Feel warned.
- some Trainers have a bit of a problem when their Pokemon dies (I'll upload a Lore about it later today read more about it here )
- my poor little squirrel QAQ
- Khail might actually eat Wilds because it doesn't really make any difference in his "cooking" skills. Viva la iron stomach.
- yes, I'm gonna throw those shiny eyes close-ups right in your faces whenever possible~
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Lore:
Mana - fav.me/d958ljm
Wilds - fav.me/d9vbkw4
Death - fav.me/d9w2s7w
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Comments: 154
I'm Simply populair dear (Khail uses charm again xD)Β Β
looks like we found a trace throws it away lets go other way XD diesΒ
those bastards killing deil and omg Sheyri's tears even more heartbreaking.Β
Cant wait on why Khail got hurt too is it cause of the bond, a bit like mega evolutionish but different as in a part of his mana beign ripped of or something ?Β
and omg those eyes in the end and the blood 
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He never stops : P
The world will pay for what they've done to poor Deil!
Exactly
Blood is fun to draw~ Β
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! DEIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Sheyri's little tears were so heart breaking )':
And totally bring the eye close ups, so dramatic, so fun. Indulge
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They made the kitty cry :<
Haha, glad to hear that~ ;]
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What ya' mean you fail at feels!? The moment i sawΒ Sheyri's face i felt the feels feeling my feels all over ;A;
It was an amazing update regardless of Deil's departure ;-; Rest in Pizza you brave little squirrel dragon, you will never be forgotten u_u
I'm more than happy that dumb talk-too-much face died! o`AΒ΄o
Give me all the shiny eyes. (O v O )
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So it means... mission accomplished? : D
Thank you so much! Maybe it's cruel but I think that Pokemon's deaths is what makes nuzlockes more interesting... My poor little squirrel...
He deserved no better! -A-
Huhu, be prepared for all theΒ shiny eyes!
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I was right! Jackass got beat SO FAST!! Be careful when you mess with an accomplished [insert whatever here]. You come alone, you're better be BETTER or you're stupid!
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He didn't deserve any more of screen time for what he did. I[
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Shiny eye close up are the best close up please keep doing it, all the red flags were right :C
On a different point I think is bound to every (mana/magic/aura/force) user to feel pain to the beings that get close to them, I can only assume that if it was Akashe the pain will increase, mostly cause the closeness would give and take more (sigh...mana/magic/aura/force)
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No problem, I''ll. =w=b
It's motive that allows us to make our OC's suffer ;]
I'm not sure myself what would happen to Khail if Akashe died. But it wouldn't be a nice sight. that's for sure...
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Brilliant page, you can really feel the emotion. I especially love the panel where Deil warns Khail about the arrows, the intensity in that panel is nearly tangible. And, of course, it's impossible not to love the quips, the lighting in the panel with Akashe and the Herdier, and the background in that one panel near the end. It's all wonderful, and I'm glad Zaira is going to be speaking now!
The only thing I have to point out is that, in the panel she speaks, she says "Are you a walking magnes for them or what?" I assume you meant to write magnet there. Singular spelling error aside, however, this is probably one of my favorite pages by far. Very well done! Can't wait to see more!
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Thank you so so much for you kind words! I'm so glad you think so and it really means a lot to me!
Ah, you're right. I often make that mistake. Probably because there's only one letter different from what we use in my country and I simply forget...
Thank you!
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Deli, noooooooo! Β
I really loved that little Patrat...Β TT_TT
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Might be wrong of me to say so, but Deil made me see Patrats in different light...
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
FUCKING NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Deil was my favorite.... *sob*
Those bastards will pay. I don't care if they're already dead. I will strike down every Herdier that ever lived.
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I'M SORRY!
They shall burn! (that's precisely why I don't like Herdiers anymore)
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Dammit, not Deil! I loved that little rat! Β
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Rangers shall be destroyed for this! :<
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I never liked them in BW, tbh. Just popping out of nowhere. If that had literally been meΒ in the gameΒ rather than a bunch of pixels representing a character, I probably would've freaked out.
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Same here. I would probably get a heart attack or something. It's just a total lack of manners!
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Ikr? The berries aren't even worth it!
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R.I.P Deil, you will be very much missed, you served your time well.
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Brilliant page. Rest in peace, sweet rodent.
What did you base the ranger on, out of curiosity? Just taking the normal ranger sprite and making it period appropriate or something else?
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Thank you!
Poor little rodents. They have a tough life.
Nothing really. I got the colors for clothes from rangers sprites in game, so they have at least something in common.
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Still think it was clever of you to take 'Park Ranger' and turn it into Archer.
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R.I.P Deil 
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Ah my gad no Deil Patrat was also my first death, Poor thing was In lvl 19 too and about to evolve. It's a shame ;n;
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TT^TT
It's a curse of Patrat's lvl 19, I tell you... '-'
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I love this update! I'm sad that Deil is gone, but it's good to see such a... murderous reaction to a pokemon death rather than the usual tears you see in nuzlockes. Khail is hardcore as shit.
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I think Khail is utterly unable to squize out even one manly tear, so he has to deal with it in another way.
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yeah a lot of people saw the character development for deil and immediately knew death was imminent. holy shit those glowy eyes and pissed off expression- khail is gonna murder everyone before burgh gets there
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Even I didn't know it was that obvious, to be honest xD
They definitely are in the wrongΒ place at the wrong time.
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D-Deil.. n.. no.. why Deil?Β Β
This comic is so damn cool. So nicely done.. when I read it, I feel like.. into the entire story, like a ghost character, watching what's going on on Earth.Β Β
You do something so cool, huney. Can't wait to see more.Β Β
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He was so young and full of dreams!
Thank you so so much! It really means a lot to me! Β
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HOW DARE YOU DO THAT TO DEIL
This is probably the only Patrat I've ever gotten attached to
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QAQ
I'm not sure whether I feel more flattered by that or guilty for killing him then...
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No! Deil! That guy deserved to die for killing Deil.
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I swear I heard that crunch in my head as I read it, and my heart seized up...
I don't like feels... Stop it with the feels...
Good job. Excellent comic, always a pleasure to see your work.Β
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