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Published: 2017-01-16 19:54:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 14243; Favourites: 59; Downloads: 10
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We're finally baaaaack! \(*^*)/And my first thoughts about this part was that.... I can't draw cities for ***!
(Just leave me alone, I tried ok?! *sob* ) QAQ
Coughcough. Anyway.
I believe I've mentioned it at some point that Khail is a womanizer. I guess being in a big city is a good opportunity to show that to the point when every girl will start to hate him!
And to be honest I have a big problems with N... I wanted to portrait him as a naive and socially awkward guy with a tendency to some creepiness at times, but at the same time to show that he has something on his mind and can be serious. Especially about his beliefs. And basically he thinks that what he knows is the common knowledge so he feels no need to explain himself, and thus is a big annoyance to anyone he tries to talk to... . I'm not sure if it works...
Not to mention that I wish I had shown their first encounter completely different. But well, that happens when you're making the story up as you go. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Trivia:
- Akashe never really managed to win any match against Khail, so he's pretty excited to have Asahi as his opponent.
- Khail knows no manners and just borrowed Asahi's Braviary, because they're in the forest outside of the Castelia, since Asahi has no Trainer license.
- In part 43 (the game-ish one) when you met N he mentioned that he wanted to talk with Khail again, and that's why he's here once again.
- In Pokemon Black/White, you don't meet N in Castelia, but I believe that at this point you know pretty well that I'm not keeping this story true to the one known from the game. It's all for the plot. And for developing N's character a bit.
- I though that it would make more sense if N was the one to talk about heroes and dragons ect instead of Ghetsis.
- Khail often uses sarcasm.
- N does't get sarcasm.
- When N says something about Khail's aura, he means an aura that any Pokemon user (Trainer/Summone ect.) have. I think I did mention it before, but I will work on the lore for this if you're interested. For now you only need to know that every Trainer can see the aura of another Poke-uses, if they focus, and every aura is a very specific one. The stronger you are, the better you see it and you can even recognize people by it, not only say how strong your opponent is. Really strong Trainers (on Gym leaders lvl or so) can somehow hide their aura to make it look weaker, but they cannot erase it or change it's "nature". But maybe N sees something more? Who knows.
- I hate that market. I. HATE. IT.
- Actually I think I failed to show it back at the very beggining of this run, that when Khail told N that he can understad Pokemon, that was a sarcasm. Nobody should have believed that. But N is a special child. And that's why he's got so attached to Khail.
- The Order of the Original One is the main religion in this world but there are many other smaller cults, or whatever you call them, for many other legendaries, but they mostly have the status of lesser gods. You know, as with Zeus and all the rest. But the Twin Heores legend would be considered a blasphemy, due to some reasons~
Cameos:
's Eugene
's Nico's back
's Ely
's Maki
's Eva and Gao
's Jo
's Will and Jade
's Tibberius
First -> fav.me/d7e62h6
Previous -> fav.me/daojvt8
Next -> fav.me/daxdgzj
Lore:
Mana - fav.me/d958ljm
Wilds - fav.me/d9vbkw4
Death - fav.me/d9w2s7w
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Comments: 54
Velink [2017-08-09 12:00:58 +0000 UTC]
Asahi lose?? WTF
all those muscles are only for show then..
no wonder he get scars all over his face
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Antarija In reply to Velink [2017-08-15 18:19:28 +0000 UTC]
Maybe he just let him win. Or didn't know how to fight a pig walking on hind legs : P
xD
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sognodrago [2017-02-09 07:05:45 +0000 UTC]
poor poor Asahi, now that's just being bullied by piggy
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Antarija In reply to sognodrago [2017-02-10 17:43:05 +0000 UTC]
He once tries to eat him, so they're even now : P
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IgnusTheTrickster [2017-02-05 21:39:40 +0000 UTC]
Omg i love the face of Jo, like -"For fuck sake this blondie is going to buy something or what?"- he is so grumpy XD.
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Antarija In reply to IgnusTheTrickster [2017-02-10 17:39:30 +0000 UTC]
I'm always like this when waiting in a queue xD
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BigBlondBeautiful [2017-02-01 08:18:52 +0000 UTC]
fuck I'm at the last one already? I cant wait any longer its so goooooood! 3
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Antarija In reply to BigBlondBeautiful [2017-02-10 17:38:22 +0000 UTC]
Haha, I'm so glad to hear that! Thank you! : D
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BigBlondBeautiful In reply to Antarija [2017-02-11 02:36:02 +0000 UTC]
your very much welcome. now get to writing *flops around* Idk if my poor heart can handle the suspense
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BigBlondBeautiful In reply to Antarija [2017-02-13 00:32:39 +0000 UTC]
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LamentedGuide [2017-01-26 22:17:11 +0000 UTC]
Hrm.... methinks that N is referring perhaps to a certain 'vision' Khail had a while ago~
But, boo! You're getting me addicted to all this juicy lore, I'm gonna go into withdrawal when it all stops XD
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Antarija In reply to LamentedGuide [2017-01-31 15:14:07 +0000 UTC]
Uhuhu, someone remembers those old times, yay : D
It will never stop, never!
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XiwyCain [2017-01-26 12:18:56 +0000 UTC]
N, Khail doesn't buy your crap.
(Awww precious N ma baby...)
Seriously... when that time happen... it's going to be very epic.
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Antarija In reply to XiwyCain [2017-01-31 15:10:31 +0000 UTC]
N needs to learn to read the mood : P
Hell yeah
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Grazyfish [2017-01-22 10:47:10 +0000 UTC]
N's mouth is way too big for his own good
but its also the best way for story to be told XD
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Antarija In reply to Grazyfish [2017-01-24 18:59:25 +0000 UTC]
Yup. He's doomed if he won't stop it soon.
That's why you need at least one character like this in the story xD
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Billiam-X [2017-01-18 23:45:58 +0000 UTC]
IT'S BACK!
N is the ultimate cockblock, bless him and his pure heart. (He was also like two seconds away from being stabbed, poor boy needs to control his tongue). Also now I'll have to be wary of every female character in this run. For all I know, they're ALL ASAHI :'D
Dude! I'm a sucker for worldbuilding through dialogue so you can bet that I really enjoyed Khail and N's little conversations. I'm really anxious to see how these two conflicting characters relate to each other as the story goes, provided Khail doesn't kill him of course. Please don't let him kill N.
Your backgrounds are amazing as always. The forest scenes are always a pleasure to look at and the city scenes are quite well done excuse you (although I can personally relate to the generous use of guassian blur wherever necessary lol)
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Antarija In reply to Billiam-X [2017-01-20 19:40:56 +0000 UTC]
Y(-^-)Y
Though it might end badly for him one day.
No, not you too! That conpiracy theory gets more fans than I expected! xD
Thank you! I'm so glad you think so! I'll do what I can, but I can't guarantee his safety if he keeps on the weirdo act.
Haha, thanks. But the fight isn't over just yet! Fear me, damn backgrounds!
(the best tool ever xD)
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jadethestone [2017-01-17 23:43:34 +0000 UTC]
I am intruiged with what you have planned for N. I am excited to see future conversations between him and Khail.
Also "frippery" is a great word. XD
And thanks for the cameos!
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Antarija In reply to jadethestone [2017-01-18 18:32:18 +0000 UTC]
I'm so glad yuo think so! : D
Now I just hope it means what I think it means xD
You're welcome!
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jadethestone In reply to Antarija [2017-01-19 00:51:35 +0000 UTC]
Hmm, Google says frippery means "showy or unnecessary in architecture, dress, or language." So I think you're mostly right. It's not a word I've heard used outside of TV, movies, or literature.
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Antarija In reply to jadethestone [2017-01-20 19:29:51 +0000 UTC]
Phew, then all is fine :>
But they teach it in Polish schools!
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jadethestone In reply to Antarija [2017-01-21 10:57:46 +0000 UTC]
How interesting. They do not teach it in American schools.
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Antarija In reply to jadethestone [2017-01-24 19:20:13 +0000 UTC]
Schools, you can trust them to teach you the most important words in foreign languages xD
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LonelyCity [2017-01-17 17:34:44 +0000 UTC]
aaa i love how you did n and khail's interactions !!
and thank you for the cameo !!
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Antarija In reply to LonelyCity [2017-01-18 18:28:18 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it!
You're welcome : D
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Demonheart1234 [2017-01-17 12:37:38 +0000 UTC]
i feel bad for the dude aka is beating him up well who cares XD
I LOVE YOUR COMIC!
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Antarija In reply to Demonheart1234 [2017-01-18 18:27:33 +0000 UTC]
At least Akashe is happy ; D
THANK YOU!
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Demonheart1234 In reply to Antarija [2017-01-20 02:58:32 +0000 UTC]
yeah your right continue! I support you till le end )
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RaineyJ [2017-01-17 03:26:36 +0000 UTC]
I think you drew the city just fine >w < I really like how the characters stand out in your backgrounds too.
Finding out lore for your world is always so fun. :3 I was thinking the same thing as Ray with Khail and N representing truth and ideals in their views towards the legends. It's a distinction I don't see people do often or well enough in BW runs.
Thanks for the cameos~ wonder where Eva was running off too? (I'm guessing she skipped out on another bar tab lol)
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Antarija In reply to RaineyJ [2017-01-18 18:26:08 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! But still, there's a long way before me...
Aw, I'm so glad to hear that!
I thought that this fight over truts/ideals is a really great theme, so I really hope I'll be able to keep it interesting.
You're welcome! (that might be the case xD)
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Raycchan [2017-01-17 02:15:54 +0000 UTC]
Aw asahi don't worry, all of khails babies are precious angels ;w; except maybe ziara pls don't let her run away
I can't believe Khail went on a date with Asahi pretending to be a pretty lady. Of course we could all take khail's line as being sarcastic but I would like to raise a new conspiracy theory: from now on all the pretty girls in this comic are seceretly asahi in disguise idec. N pls khail has pretty lady #1 (asahi) he doesn't need you stop trying to get senpai to notice you.
Lol on a serious note, nice delivery of the lore ouob it feels like khail's side of the story represents the 'truth' where the dragons caused a lot of suffering with thier fighting and N's represents the 'ideals' where the dragons have their ends justifying the means or sth idk maybe???
Also yay for city bgs XD give your hand a reast after all those buildings and cameossss (and thanks for featuring my cat son and his smol parasite aka gao XD)
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Antarija In reply to Raycchan [2017-01-18 18:21:50 +0000 UTC]
Of course. They might chomp on you, incinerate you, cut to pieces or simply trample you to death and fry with a thunder, but it's all out of love~
How were you able to see right though my conspiracy?! Impossibruuu! (But what about a situation when there are more than just one pretty girl at the same time, hm?)
Thanks! Huhuhu, I can't say much about this, but I hope you'll find those theories entertaining in the future~
No rest for that hand untill it learns cities! Vive la slavery! \QAQ/
(you're welcome~!)
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ShadeOfObscurity [2017-01-17 01:04:39 +0000 UTC]
Don't worry about your city looking like shit, it will always be better than me and my non existing attempts at backgrounds. Besides I can see you cries in the yellow speech bubble between panel 9 and 10.
If you need an explanation for N way of thinking about the legend here is how I see it. That story he's saying is the truth and because religion is what it is the story has changed over time to suit the need of the people and assholes that rule it but Ghestis being someone who probably found an old book, tapestry or other plot device that set him on a path to correct this. So it might be possible for this Ghestis to not be a complete jerk if you didn't plan the story far ahead.
And finally Khali watch that wallet. I don't know but she might be a gold digger.
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Antarija In reply to ShadeOfObscurity [2017-01-18 18:10:49 +0000 UTC]
Haha, thanks... My cries has been heard \QwQ/
You're getting surprisingly close to the plot, so let's stop it here xD
But I did plan the story far ahead, it's just smaller things and details I'm making up as I go. And personalities of some characters... That's probably because at first the game was still too fresh in my head :/
I think that people should rather watch their wallets around Khail xD (I bet some poor folks will be the ones to pay for this girl's gift)
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ShadeOfObscurity In reply to Antarija [2017-01-20 13:39:48 +0000 UTC]
It's not like I secretly ninja into you home look at your story notes
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SkadiErendra [2017-01-16 22:15:50 +0000 UTC]
Yay, Maki!
Muszę powiedzieć, że podoba mi się jak przedstawiłaś N'a. Teraz to jego gadanie o wewnętrznym porządku świata jest dużo ciekawsze, bo brzmi po prostu jak nawiedzony otaku XD Pasuje mu to!
Biedny Asahi, świnia go pokonała ("Dla takich łachmytów "Pan Świnia!!!""XD)
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Antarija In reply to SkadiErendra [2017-01-18 18:00:18 +0000 UTC]
Nawiedzeni otaku (aka kultyści) zawsze pasują. Zawsze. Wszędzie.
Pfftt, trzeba to zrobić standardowym tekstem Akashe xD Niech ma swojego idola, a co!
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Antarija In reply to SkadiErendra [2017-01-24 19:18:28 +0000 UTC]
Czasem znajduje się (creepy) perełki =w=
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Grusnoid [2017-01-16 20:17:00 +0000 UTC]
www.youtube.com/watch?v=QpvM9u…
We are having some major crossover here, with this lore. All we need now is a civil war, and for Khail to be the Dovahkiin. XD
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Antarija In reply to Grusnoid [2017-01-18 17:58:05 +0000 UTC]
Now that you've found out, it's just about waiting for him to do the fus ro dah xD
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Grusnoid In reply to Antarija [2017-01-18 18:07:39 +0000 UTC]
You thought you where so sneaky didn't you. But you can't hide Elder Scrolls lore from me. XD
Yeah, I guess that means Khail, could be the next emperor of Tamriel. This whole story, just took an awesome turn if the Pokeverse is everything that takes place on an opposite hemisphere of Nirn. XD
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