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Published: 2010-08-12 21:29:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 658; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 6
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what sets me of-f-let me off
let the getting
beg-in
in the blood;
taste
the golden c
rests
on this color
less
black
ness
eulogy
you
love (d)me
beg inning
a gain a
be ginning
t his
one
(e ver y)
evening:
in
the wind's
invisible sl
ants,
tre (s)
e-
shaped,
rain-
chapped,
e very a ware ness
br anch(ors)es out
di (e) a(l)mond s cut
in e yes
the color
and shape-ly
feel
of trees
i rise
i ris
i rinse
my arms
int he lake-
water's
wash;
pater
et al
in-
nantes
tres
sistrs
be ng born
smwhere
the sun
is now
here
near
setting--
satin hrs
str
etch,
st
(r)
ain fingerless
and a(r)mless
i ' m
a im less
in them
elastic
an d pipe
ing
musiclessly
juice lessly
no one
eve r
eally
touche s.
our
liber
al
all-
owance
forgetting
the s-tops
and the stay-ings
mak-yngs
passing
by(e)
with durayshn
all furld
like a dead lily.
no
w
my fl-g
l-gging
n th wnd,
th-
s-lnt
tr-mpts
snding
me
aw
ay.
.
.
Comments: 4
archelyxs [2010-08-12 21:32:30 +0000 UTC]
Wow.
I had to read this verrry slowly...
you're like e.e. cummings but better.
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Anthony-Ryan In reply to archelyxs [2010-08-12 21:37:32 +0000 UTC]
i'm glad you like it!
i am in the throes of frustration, because i can't get the form to translate from document to deviation--the margins keep doing their own thing, regardless of my tinkering.
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archelyxs In reply to Anthony-Ryan [2010-08-16 00:08:30 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I know how that is, haha. Good luck with that.
It's fantastic the way it is.
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Anthony-Ryan In reply to Anthony-Ryan [2010-08-12 21:49:58 +0000 UTC]
ah, got it. i always forget copying and pasting where you've used the "shift" key is always a bad idea.
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