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Published: 2008-01-13 01:42:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 138; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description i left behind god and heaven's light
while i sat in the dark
with satan by my side
and waited

then one day i decided
to turn over my own soul
to the being of flame
so i could live agian

but people say it's wrong
but it is what i think
because god betrayed me
so why should he be my belief

i am now the angel
that will drag you down
when your light is smothered
and then quickly blown out

so what is my religion
people somtimes ask
i'll lie and say i'm christian
but i'm truly a satanist at heart
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Comments: 13

Bahama-dreams [2008-01-26 01:32:37 +0000 UTC]

I think this states your point of view well, it seems I dunno, a little dry. But you need to write what you believe man, that's what counts.

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antorin In reply to Bahama-dreams [2008-01-26 23:34:05 +0000 UTC]

ty

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DreamsSetOnMute [2008-01-25 11:43:40 +0000 UTC]

I liked the theme of it. Very provocative, but I disliked the wording very much. I don't feel that you were really trying to open your heart on this. I'm led to believe, that you just wrote this for the heck of it.

I'm sorry to be so harsh, but I just couldn't see this as a sincere poem.

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antorin In reply to DreamsSetOnMute [2008-01-25 20:50:42 +0000 UTC]

kk

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PoetryOD [2008-01-23 19:50:52 +0000 UTC]

Dark and thought provoking. It reflects the narrators feelings well, it seems.

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antorin In reply to PoetryOD [2008-01-24 22:34:28 +0000 UTC]

kk tyvm

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trevorelder [2008-01-13 23:17:35 +0000 UTC]

Great job!
On a side note I must add: I don't care if people are Satanic. Whatever you believe in; I respect.

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antorin In reply to trevorelder [2008-01-14 14:37:08 +0000 UTC]

cool im the same way i dont hate ppl because of religion i think thats a stupid reson to hate someone and ty for the coment

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trevorelder In reply to antorin [2008-01-16 00:30:54 +0000 UTC]

That's great! Close-mindedness is a major pet peeve of mine.
No problem.

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behindblood [2008-01-13 16:54:04 +0000 UTC]

Nice written good luck with the contest

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antorin In reply to behindblood [2008-01-13 19:48:18 +0000 UTC]

tyvm

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PoetryOD [2008-01-13 09:14:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for entering, good luck!

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antorin In reply to PoetryOD [2008-01-13 16:18:39 +0000 UTC]

tyvm

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