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Published: 2009-04-04 03:53:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 516; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 4
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Page 18 of my comic/thingy ESC. Yeah, I know I changed several things again. I'm still trying to find my happy place with this thing XD I kind of like the blue, and I hope this file size isn't too small to see. If it is, I'll post it in a larger size, so let me know in the comments if you have trouble reading it
Also, thank you for reading this, even though I never update and I'm still very bad at this 
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This is a really great page, but the blue lines kinda messed it up
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His face is a wee bit broad, you need to make his jaw slightly bigger, maybe?
I like the changing camera angles and the last two panels though.
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last two panels are my favorite<3
how did you shade his coat like that??
this is great
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Thank you so much! I shaded it with pencil 'cause I have no idea where you can buy screen tones and probably can't afford them XD When I scanned it, I messed with the RGB values to turn it blue. I just wanted to try it out since a lot of shoujo manga make the pages funky colors, but I don't think I'll ever do it again. I like black and white better I think. It's more dynamic to me.
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Also, to shade it that way, I just brushed the pencil in the same direction every time. I wanted to see if I could give it more texture this way.
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Umm...aoiyoru, you typed "talk" twice. Doesn't make sense. anyway i'll be glad to help you write down the words and stuff! 
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Wait.....CRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAP!!!!!! DX
I HATE PUTTING IN THE WORDS!! Please and thank you on helping me write the words out. I need all the help i can get XD
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Sure!
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Was playing Subarashiki kono Sekai. About to go get in shower.
Why you up?
Oh, and thank you
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Meh... drawing, and well... surfing the net!
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i'm doing that now too, but gonna get off soon. Need sleep!!
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I don't see anything "very bad" about this at all.
It looks good, but have you ever thought of sketching the words? It seems like they're too different from each other.
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Thank you!! And about the words.... I don't like them either! It makes me sad :< I use Corel Painter Essentials 4 to put them in, and it's a major pain. Maybe I should get my editor to write them in for me instead. She has super neat, pretty hand writing. Mine's chicken-scratch XD
Thanks for the sugestion
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Thank you! He's evil though, trust me. He's a pain in the butt to draw XD
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The blue looks really cool~ I like how clean the lines came out in this one too.
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Thank you!! I think the lines also came out cleaner because I resized it, but thought it was to small, so I resized it again to a larger size XD
Oh well, least the end product was good.
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