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Aozora210 — The Flame Tears Cannot Extinguish 003
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Published: 2019-05-13 08:42:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 1453; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 1
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It's here finally!!!
This page took longer than I expected, but I guess I also worked on huge chunk of the next update so hopefully it'll come sooner?
Anyway about this update.... what can I say. |D;;; I guess some small worldbuilding notes
- Pokecens tend to have their own hostel rooms, but they get crowded easily, esp in high season (spring, which is when most kids starts going on their journey if they decided to skip school lol), and they always prioritize younger trainers, so a lot of people in the cities w/ gyms open their house for some sort of homestays or BnBs kind of thing, which is what Fia was doing.
- That's Jupiter on TV yeah.
- Who walks between cities when you can get on trains? Sadly even w/ trainer discount, intercity magnet train is still expensive (you can google shinkansen ticket price for comparison) so in the end u gotta walk then (or get on bus to actually get you to the train station, but I guess you gotta watch geodude roll race first and accidentally fall over the cliff)
- Mar is a goode.
- When you're a fan artist, literally nothing can stop you for drawing local food stuff into your comic.
Shoutouts:
- Shoutout to my betas and for being awesome!
- Special thanks to and also Obelisk for helping me with this update.
- Cameos included are 's Bertha and Tero, and also 's Zoe and Pepper.
Thanks for reading and have a nice day!
Pokemon (c) GameFreak and also The Pokemon Company
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Comments: 39
WHAT DO YOU MEAN ITS NOT A BIG DEAL TO MISS YOUR TRAIN
HOW
HOW CHEAP ARE YOUR TICKETS GURL ?!!!
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It's not cheap!!! I think the price is comparable to shinkansen price which is like 12k~20k yen/pokedollar depending on the destination.
But if it's for someone important to her...
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Then surely they can understand that train tickets are expensive DDDD:
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They would! But Fia is just.... that kind of person, unfortunately
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awhhhh Fia dont but also ur a good person----
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I love how every page has a different color scheme. Every page is always so pretty.
But also aaaah Fia!! I know that little diamond means some sort of interference will save her, but jeez that one panel of her falling with Oreburgh below is so scary!
Also, I'm getting strong mom vibes from Fia whenever Mar is around. They're really cute
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She's safe and sound!
I'm glad if the falling panel does it justice. I was worried if it wasn't clear enough, but I'm glad to hear your thought!
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This was a great page!! I enjoyed the little catchup we had, and it really does keep softening Fia for us to see her care so much for Mar.
I do wonder if Fia will ever do anything selfishly and if there will be repercussions... she reminds me a lot of a reed in the wind, just bending to the will of that force upon her.
and your cast is so lively!
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Will Fia ever do something selfish? Maybe we'll find that out sometime later :^)
Thank you very much, Fey!! ;w;
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hm! this seems fine! no danger here!
and aaaAAAA AGGRESSIVELY POINTS THOSE ARE MY KIDS! GETTING SOME YUMMY FOOD!!! thank you so much for the cameos omg ;;;w;;;
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yep! croquette man to the rescue (hopefully?)
You're welcome and your kids are so good!!! Thank you too!!!
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I honestly don't know how she's gonna survive that, but we'll see in the next update! (hopefully)
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Hmmmmmmmm
Guess its time for the To be Contiued meme.
But really im excited for the next page~
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*intense guitar music*
Thank you so much! Please look forward to it!
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Power move is to kill off the protagonist in the first chapter
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*looks at the first update* Yeah, that almost happened.
We have too much dead Pokemon, time to have dead trainer too o>-<
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I love the sibling-like protectiveness of Fia
The art style is delightful
Also, I LOVE the name of this comic. Gosh, I love it.
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Aaaah thank you so much!! ;w;
The run title is from a song titled Namida de wa Kesenai Honoo by a group called Sound Horizon!
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YOOOOOOOOOOO this is RAD as SHIT!!!!!!!!
hralkjfhjd mar is,,, baby,,,,, i want to wrap him in a blanket and keep him safe,,,,
and OH BOY HERE COMES CYRUS LETS GO BABEY
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Aaaaa thank you so much!!!
Let's form Mar protection squad!! He needs to be protected at all cost...
Also hee yaw Cyrus!!! I wonder what he's gonna do next... I can't wait (to draw it)
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aaaaa I love the backgrounds and the muted colours you use!!! also I like how you incorporated world building int Fia and Mar's conversation!! I can't wait to read more (assuming Fia's okay! :0)!!
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Hi yes, thank you very much!! ;;w;;
I always think effective world building must be a worldbuilding that's relevant to the characters, so the characters feel like they exist in a world that's alive uwu
And please look forward to more! I'll do my best!
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I can't believe the first person to die in this nuzlocke is the trainer.
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Omg me too. Now she has to be permaboxed, oh no
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fIA DONT FALLL AA
god, i know i saw it on the stream, but this actually made me more anxious ,,,
also nice cameos >>
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Too late u,_u,)
Hahahah I'm glad if the real thing still gives a deeper impression even after you saw it on the stream. I'm really glad for that ;w;
And thank you!
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yeah, can't wait for more pages,,, the plot and art is so interesting so far :sob:
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AHHHHHH AO THIS PAGE!! i love the starlys and their weird little haircuts. Also the panels where you experimented with gradients look nice!! (like the one with the staravias, its very subtle but i think it makes a big difference)
that dialga motif is so ominous : o
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Awawa, thank you so much, Miz!!! I'm glad those things managed to work well ;;w;; ))
Also gee I wonder what Dialga actually wants this time...
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I love the narration tone here so much! Is that guy on the last panel supposed to be Cyrus?
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Thank you very much!! ;w;
Also I wanna say yes, but for now, you can address him as Croquette Man.
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You are welcome! So Croquette Man may save the day in next update?
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We shall see in the incoming update! (which i have to work on soon |D)
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Yeah! Have fun creating, your comic is really lovely!
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