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Gpotious [2010-07-29 22:56:49 +0000 UTC]

Loooove all the brush strokes in this. Especially the texturing on the pants. :'D And that wall.

Though I feel that her breasts are too defined. The lines there are distracting. The leg farther than us seems to be longer the the nearer leg. Finally, the tree closest to us is, well, too close: looks like it's going right against the wall here.

But you're definitely improving, Elky. c:

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Kurai-Kaze [2010-07-29 22:16:56 +0000 UTC]

This picture has a great mood, all the yellows/browns work so well together~
Those trees look so dreamy and golden. *____*

But I noticed few things, so a bit of critique regarding the BG: Judging from the vanishing point of the wall the "camera" is looking at the woman and the wall from little bit above. So we should not be able to see the horizon. But the golden lights behind the trees make it seem like the horizon line is right there in the middle. So either we should see the brick wall from eye level, or horizon should be out of the picture. But then again, I love the way you executed those trees, and the wall could look boring from the eye level. I don't really know if you planned the picture to look like that, I'm sorry if I'm wrong. >___<

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