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How can this be on terribleponyocblogthingy?!
This is just your ponysona whose representing uuu ;W;
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Hmm... not really a fan of the legs and wings, but she is still adorable ^_^
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Ditch the wings and rainbows on her body and she's good.
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I like her!
I mean, I don't like the ear, wings or horn. They just seem off for me.
And I'd probably change the rainbow feet into rainbow socks, but other than that, i like her!
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You need a backstory friend, I sell cheap stories you can always buy one.
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Lets execute why this is a bad oc
1. Alicorns are rare, therefore, there should be as few as possible
2. Too much rainbows
3. Eyesore
4. Could you see this character being in mlp, as a main character and a background one.
5. Too much graident
6. HAVE A FRIGGIN BACKSTORY. GOD, IT ANNOYS ME SO MUCH THAT IT'S JUST SOME DANG OC WITH NO BACKSTORY OR A NAME, OR A PERSONALITY!
7. What makes it look like that?
8. How did she get her cutie mark? Why?
9. Remember, WWWWWH (When, Why, Where, Who, What, HOW?)
10. This IS a marysue.
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For you i'm a Mary Sue :/ But i just don't care for the hater's, my bad.
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It's undeveloped.
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I think there is too much rainbows. rainbows in the mane is just enough. The eyes could be a nice blue or green to make the color scheme look much better.
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As much as I love the rainbow it could be turned down a tad. I feel that it would be better if the the wings, eyes, horn, and ear did not have the rainbow. The hair can be entirely the pastel rainbow to contrast the white, or maybe have it go from rainbow to white and not back to rainbow. Props for not making the paint rainbow, people tend to go overboard with cutiemarks. The paint bucket, though making it unique, seems a bit much to be honest. Perhaps if it had more detail, or the bucket had a curved bottom, it would look better. Oh and a bit on the mane and tail. To be frank they don't seem to match, though I simply LOVE her mane style. Maybe match the tail to that hair part with the accessory to keep that elegance. It could also be put in a Jasmine style. The rainbow on the legs could be made into shoes, or left alone since it would be dull if she was all white. This is all my opinion, and if you left it alone it would still be a cute pony. I just had a few views to make it better in my own eyes. As long as you are happy with it that's all that matter.
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I like a loooot of Rainbows ^^ And my simple Cutie Mark is to say i'm simple 
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She isn't a Mary Sue, just underdeveloped. A Mary Sue is a character that is perfect in every way, like loved by everyone and extremely overpowered without weakness. She is a representation of yourself as I'm guessing so she obviously isn't perfect, just like any person in real life. People need to learn that making a character a certain species does not make them perfect and overpowered. Just look at Celestia and Luna, both of which we have seen their magical limitations thanks to the new episode. Alicorns are not gods, and although they are the closest thing to them in the poniverse, it is no crime to make a character of their species. I also must add that species all have their variety of strengths and there can be Alicorns on the weaker side, like Fluttershy was to the pegasuses with her flying. To make my point, your character is not a Mary Sue just because she is lacking a bio and is an Alicorn. She can be a unicorn and still be the same character so why change her? Would removing her wings make her any different? She is an expression of you and people should just accept that people like to express their imaginations in different ways, and unless you write her in a way where she is more powerful than Celestia with no weaknesses or flaws and is loved by everybody and anybody, she is not a Mary Sue. Sorry for the rant I just feel that people throw around the term 'Mary Sue' needlessly, which I see as an insult to creativity. Yeah people can have their opinions, however, if people continue the term 'Mary Sue' will be an insult rather than a form of constructive criticism.
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I agree with you, i'm the most solitary one at... maybe the world .-. And the people at my school.. blerg. My oc don't fly, she just... well, go to the sky, but if she try to mive she fall.. But she have a normal unicorn magic, buut... everyone just think she is a Mary Sue :/ But thanks, you understand me ^^
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It's... honestly, a bit bland, from a color perspective. The rainbows aren't overwhelming, which is very good, but ultimately the only two colors are white and rainbow. Yes, I count rainbow as one color. Add that to an alicorn base, and it's pretty, but I can't say it's super creative for a pony whose talent is painting.
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Everyone say is a Mary Sue, but i just love Rainbows and my dream is to fly, and the magic is My mom and my dad are unicorns Sooo, it's me Mary Sue c:
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??
Canonically, having two unicorn parents makes you a unicorn.
I get it, you just want to use MLP as a blueprint...
It's not necessarily a Mary Sue, just an unnecessary alicorn character.
Although, rainbows HAVE been getting a lot of love lately. ;D
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:/ Well i like my Rainbows, my horn and my wings, so if some one don't like me and think i'm a Mary Sue i don't careΒ Β
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I think this is amazing.
Someone posted this on:Β World's Worst Pony OCs
Kinda rude.
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They stink. xD
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I don't care fot they opnion c:
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Looks good, I like the coloring, but looks like a generic rainbow alicorn, maybe you should use a few of the rainbow colors instead of the whole batch. That way, it won't be named another generic alicorn again.
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this is the most constructive comment i have ever seen.
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Typically not a fan of rainbow coloring,but I absolutely adore her.*Huggles*
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Goshlygoo I really like the rainbow! What program do you use?
I just wish to let you know, you got on a tumblr called Terrible Ponies, so you'll probably be harassed..
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Cute, but VERY mary-sueish. Id recommend making a new OC
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Wow! Shes stunning.
Rainbow is like, EH. I LOVE ALL COLORS!
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