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Hey look! Its my third sonic i ever drew in my whole life.I need some hardcore criticism please...
IMO i think i shouldve made the shoe bigger?
give him a smaller body..and smaller forehead...
:/
*edit
i didnt something very wrong with the eyes..so i fixed it
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Comments: 24
bigsmash [2011-04-11 19:41:01 +0000 UTC]
nice sonic you drew so is you going to draw buttercupz chasing sonic with her hammer.
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dataumbreon [2007-08-08 09:50:19 +0000 UTC]
well it looks just fine if ya ask me but then again i havent seen sonic in so long
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Lunaros [2007-08-07 23:29:47 +0000 UTC]
It loooks great~ X3 But... if you really want criticism...
Assuming you're doing the newer Sonic (Not the old '90's one. XD) I think you should make his stomach thinner. :3 The newer one isn't very round. o: It's a bit of an odd shape. o:
There's something about the hands/arms that bugs me a little, but they seem fine. >: Hm... >>
Other then that, you've done a great job~ 83 Everything (Especially the quills) is pretty much perfect~ ^__^
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Shadowkero [2007-08-07 19:48:45 +0000 UTC]
O:! I think you're Sonic is Beautiful. <3 So Don't worry.
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Donnis [2007-08-07 06:55:04 +0000 UTC]
How can you draw all those nintendo characters soooo wellllllll
o_o
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StrawberryChi [2007-08-07 04:19:26 +0000 UTC]
wowww, I honestly see nothing wrong with this~!! Great job!
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AppleLove In reply to StrawberryChi [2007-08-07 06:34:08 +0000 UTC]
aw thanks! im glad some people like it..~
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Redracat [2007-08-07 02:11:34 +0000 UTC]
Ooh. I'm no good at crits, so I suppose I can practice that and in return help you practice.
The body does need to be a bit smaller, you're correct there. His right hand and arm are pretty HUEG as well. It's out of proportion opposed to the left.
Well, that's just what I think. I like the way you drew Sonic overall. The expression and posing look nice, and the flats have been chosen well. :>
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AppleLove In reply to Redracat [2007-08-07 02:18:42 +0000 UTC]
Oh shoot..your like the total opposites above everyone else..
im not sure if the right hand and arm are too long and skinny..or if the left hands and arm is too short and stubby..
hmm..xD
anyways thanks for your crit..(;
flats meaning shoes right? XD
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Redracat In reply to AppleLove [2007-08-07 02:22:23 +0000 UTC]
Flats meaning the flat colors. Ya know, no shading. Sorry about that. |D
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the-good-times [2007-08-07 02:11:21 +0000 UTC]
hmm nice job. I like how you pulled it off without shading or highlighting o__o
anyways
I think his head is slouching a bit.. put it on top of his shoulders more..
the left arm is too wide and is too long..
and the mouth make it seem... out of place. o_o;;
anyways.. thats all i got =3= lalala~
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AppleLove In reply to the-good-times [2007-08-07 02:15:38 +0000 UTC]
Ah something new.
Yeah..i kinda noticed he was slouching...but i cant really tell since its my own picture..
the left arm..i can see how its too wide...
but length is okay..since his hands are suppose to touch the feet..o_o i think..;;
and the mouth...i see where thats coming from..but tis suppose to be exagerated...
but thanks for the criticism. helped me alot..^^
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Ihatebigwords [2007-08-07 02:07:20 +0000 UTC]
I think the body is a bit too round and not quite long enough, but other than that, it looks fine, better than anything I could have ever done for my third try X3
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AppleLove In reply to Ihatebigwords [2007-08-07 02:13:03 +0000 UTC]
Yes the proportion of the body is not right...
i must keep that in mind...
thank you XD
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pichu90 [2007-08-07 01:52:15 +0000 UTC]
I think the legs are a little too long, but it may be because the body is a little small. Other than that I think it looks ok.
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AppleLove In reply to pichu90 [2007-08-07 01:56:53 +0000 UTC]
Long? o_o are you sure? if you see official sonic pictures..his legs are pretty long..longer than this one..xD
but yeah..i think its the body...
Thank you for the criticism..:3
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Larka-X-Fell [2007-08-07 01:50:32 +0000 UTC]
(be forth warned im not good at this)
i think his body is just a little short. i think it should be a little longer. not hugely just an inch or two.
idk. maybe that's it.
but i think it is an awsome drawing especially for a third try.
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AppleLove In reply to Larka-X-Fell [2007-08-07 01:55:49 +0000 UTC]
yeah...i made the body long at first...but i thought it would look better with a shorter body..but i guess i was wrong..xD
the head seems extremely big for me...i dont know why...
thanks anyways...(=
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Larka-X-Fell In reply to AppleLove [2007-08-07 02:07:10 +0000 UTC]
idk i kinda got used to the picture now so i can't see what you ean. XD so obviously whatever it is it isn't that bad.
you're welcome.
either way its still really good.
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