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ArbitraryLabby — Steven Universe Comic Peridot's Redemption Part 17

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Published: 2015-08-08 21:31:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 21695; Favourites: 376; Downloads: 34
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Description The end of the road, my friends.

Previous episode -    

  DON'T FORGET TO CHECK OUT PERIDOT'S REDEMPTION VIDEO www.youtube.com/watch?v=iJeBbx… ;  

Feel free to leave a critique if you want to comment on all of the 17 episodes of this comic.
It would help me improve with my next project,

Thanks for participating this amazing adventure with me, it's been a good run. 

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Comments: 129

ArbitraryLabby In reply to ??? [2015-09-25 01:19:02 +0000 UTC]

Don;t worry, the redeemed comic will still keep on going no matter what happens in the actual show. "Catch and Release" is pretty funny though, I might make some adjustments to the comic, this is why I delayed the comic so I can get more info. Thanks for the critique!

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maxiedie In reply to ArbitraryLabby [2015-09-25 21:16:43 +0000 UTC]

Ok. Your welcome for the critique!

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Timeward [2015-08-31 21:14:28 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Damn, is this comic good. The lack of dialogue makes it even more incredible, since we can understand, from their personalities, what each of them want to say without needing to read any words. The progress is also perfect, with peridot learning of the kindness humans can show, to how they can be fun and become important in a short amount of time. Her courage of getting near the temple makes it feel like she actualy wants to be redeemed, to say that she is sorry, but she doesnt know how to do it, and the way she looks at the sky and remembers everything, makes us see the show from her perspective. It must have been terrifying for her, who never had seen a natural fusion before, to watch sugilite form and destroy the tower she had worked hard to repair just to send a distress call and maybe go home. You delivered the sadness she must have felt perfectly, and the way steven helps her redeem herself. Also, i think the few months trasition was perfect, showing she might have volunteerely poofed so she could heal her leg and change. The sticker, the first thing she saw of the gems, is a nice touch too. In the end, a magnificent work that has to be appreciated. Great job.

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ArbitraryLabby In reply to Timeward [2015-09-22 04:03:01 +0000 UTC]

Much appreciated. Thank you so much for this thoughtful critique.

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Timeward In reply to ArbitraryLabby [2015-09-22 08:21:45 +0000 UTC]

No problem ^^

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Leinnon [2016-11-23 12:11:03 +0000 UTC]

Love it!! <3

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sangenjin [2016-10-10 18:55:19 +0000 UTC]

Though the sufficiently wonderful job of redeeming peridot, though it seemed somewhat forced with a world destroying entity making a need to collaborate, with this, it has taken time, self discovery, and revelations and no panicking and hurry to leave, which I feel makes the shown main theme love much more significant. A lovely series in all...

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567272 [2016-08-04 01:54:45 +0000 UTC]

For a secant there I thought that a tall Steven.

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AxvBonnieSwag9480 [2016-05-31 03:35:51 +0000 UTC]

Yay!!!!!!All of the feeeeeeeeeeeeels!

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MidnightSaga [2016-04-03 23:27:10 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, but I literally cried while reading this. It's so good

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ArbitraryLabby In reply to MidnightSaga [2016-04-04 04:14:16 +0000 UTC]

don't forget to watch the video version!

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DragonTurtle2 [2016-03-05 09:21:26 +0000 UTC]

The unspoken "fuck Jasper" makes me laugh.  But in all seriousness, I think it would have been better off ending with just Peridot at the beach. When we get the front view of her, we can tell she's undergone dramatic change. The fact that she's in human garb and bearing the star symbol (and isn't dead) shows that things went over pretty well with the Crystal Gems, and has been able to integrate with Earth pretty well. But she looks shaken, and uncertain about how to reflect on her journey and what the future holds. But then having all the gems gathering around to signify that they're all such good friends feels like oversimplifying the development Peridot's had. Throwing in Lapis out of nowhere just feels like trying to hard to tie up loose ends.

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XxAlphysNEOxX [2016-02-15 14:14:49 +0000 UTC]

STUPID REBECCA SUGAR, YOU CLOD, YOU RUINED HER REDEMPTION DESIGN AND FAN REDEMPTION IDEAS

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ArbitraryLabby In reply to XxAlphysNEOxX [2016-02-15 14:21:47 +0000 UTC]

  Whoah there...

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XxAlphysNEOxX In reply to ArbitraryLabby [2016-02-15 14:23:23 +0000 UTC]

Just think about the fact that Peridot got a redemption so quickly in these episode and Log Date 7 1 5 2 kinda explained it but before that 'Life and Death' felt like the Spongebob fun song 

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albert40-wesker [2016-01-14 01:09:23 +0000 UTC]

Esta historia me llego al KORA ENSERIO ME HA GUSTADO :V

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Austin7613 [2015-12-31 14:09:36 +0000 UTC]

Saw the YouTube video. I must say this comic is just so good. It makes you hope cannon goes something like this.

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Chrysocolla-Chan [2015-12-14 21:53:22 +0000 UTC]

I dont really like that hair...
just saying  anyway GREAT COMIC!!

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ArbitraryLabby In reply to Chrysocolla-Chan [2015-12-15 02:46:39 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry, the hair has been changed a while ago

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Chrysocolla-Chan In reply to ArbitraryLabby [2015-12-23 17:42:28 +0000 UTC]

Thats what Im talking about
 

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Prince-Robby [2015-11-11 03:14:45 +0000 UTC]

What about Jasper?

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TryingTheBest In reply to Prince-Robby [2015-11-15 19:56:36 +0000 UTC]

there's a comic of that too, but is not submited

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Kannakomi [2015-10-31 22:06:44 +0000 UTC]

Man, I really want her to join the crystal gems...

This is a great story. I saw the video on YouTube and discovered it here now. I have to admit, this is a very deep comic which I didn't expect to find for Peridot. Really good job!

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shadowlancelot [2015-10-25 00:12:49 +0000 UTC]

just like the endings of few animes

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RuetheFox [2015-10-24 02:11:54 +0000 UTC]

:3 silent pages are pretty cool!

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Camioldshieldo3o [2015-10-23 11:20:27 +0000 UTC]

more plz

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SONRISA-MORTAL [2015-09-30 06:10:59 +0000 UTC]

OMG OMG OMG OMG I LOVE THIS COMIC ^w^

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Diabolik91 [2015-09-28 16:47:27 +0000 UTC]

Just read this comic, really nice. Did you draw it before Catch and Release ?

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ArbitraryLabby In reply to Diabolik91 [2015-09-28 17:04:14 +0000 UTC]

Wayyy before the episode came out, August 8. I always knew that Peridot will have a chance of redemption (or at least live with the crystal gems) sooner or later in the show. Didn't expect it to be like in Catch & Release, but it's something.

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G3f0rce440 [2015-09-26 10:52:14 +0000 UTC]

An happy ending should have a "That's all,Folks" card at the end

Anyways,where's Jasper?

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ToyFazbear1987 In reply to G3f0rce440 [2015-10-05 01:09:24 +0000 UTC]

jasper is living with yellow diamond in the giant strip cluhb up in the sky

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ArbitraryLabby In reply to G3f0rce440 [2015-09-26 10:55:00 +0000 UTC]

Find out soon!

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maxiedie [2015-09-24 22:54:21 +0000 UTC]

Catch and release just ruined this comic -facepalm-

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ArbitraryLabby In reply to maxiedie [2015-09-24 23:03:29 +0000 UTC]

ah dont worry, this comic is set on an alternate universe where all of the things in the comic happen unlike the actual show.

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maxiedie In reply to ArbitraryLabby [2015-09-25 21:17:07 +0000 UTC]

 

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Ummila [2015-09-22 03:16:41 +0000 UTC]

FINALLY,FINALLY I FOUND YOUR DEVIANART

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ArbitraryLabby In reply to Ummila [2015-09-22 04:01:26 +0000 UTC]

o_o !

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Ummila In reply to ArbitraryLabby [2015-09-22 22:04:09 +0000 UTC]

I follow you in youtube !  

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ArbitraryLabby In reply to Ummila [2015-09-22 23:24:49 +0000 UTC]

Ah, I see.   Thanks!

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Ummila In reply to ArbitraryLabby [2015-09-24 03:50:45 +0000 UTC]

 

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Ally-Kats [2015-09-09 00:40:46 +0000 UTC]

aw...it has a bittersweet story. i realy like it.

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gordhanx [2015-09-03 13:46:17 +0000 UTC]

This was incredibly well done. The song choices, the reactions, the pacing. It was all incredibly well done, and incredibly feelsy. Loved it. I'll be honest, I never really saw Peridot as the sympathetic type of person (Then again, I've just recently made it to the season 1 finale, so maybe it'll be shown later on) but you really made it work. Great job.

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ArbitraryLabby In reply to gordhanx [2015-09-03 15:28:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for this thoughtful comment, it means alot.
Also for the favs

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gordhanx In reply to ArbitraryLabby [2015-09-03 16:22:10 +0000 UTC]

It was no problem in the least .

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DEMarq [2015-08-27 14:55:58 +0000 UTC]

   This is really cool, (claps)   But for some reason I think that Peridot is going to be betrayed or killed by Yellow for failure or finished off by Garnet for forced fusion.   Do you think Steven will get his healing powers back and cure the experimented gems?  

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ArbitraryLabby In reply to DEMarq [2015-08-27 15:33:45 +0000 UTC]

Steven might be able to heal but for sure that he wont any time soon since Rose can't even help them. And yea, Yellow Diamond will not be pleased.

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DEMarq In reply to ArbitraryLabby [2015-08-27 17:39:33 +0000 UTC]

   Steven watches in horror as Yellow destroys Peridot from the back, in his sadness and abit of rage he gains a new power.  Healing / Rez or Shield Attack?

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ArbitraryLabby In reply to DEMarq [2015-08-27 23:00:48 +0000 UTC]

That's actually a very good idea but I prefer Peridot alive XD maybe poofed after getting attack

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DEMarq In reply to ArbitraryLabby [2015-08-28 05:57:40 +0000 UTC]

 Ok, she gets poofed ^_*

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ArbitraryLabby In reply to DEMarq [2015-08-27 23:00:17 +0000 UTC]

That would be a good idea but I would love to keep Peridot alive XD

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