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Published: 2004-08-26 23:24:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 233; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Scrape through a clawing crawl
grating bones & bark
do your fated toes & fingers
mangle through gravel sand & soil
or do they sweep through emerald velvet fields
where dandelion’s feathers and neon yellow & purple flowers
tickle you as they pass

will you then
float sink or swim
through swelling sapphire oceans of daydreams
treasures inspire---- if you aspire
life’ll evolve from what it now seems
so rescue chance’s shimmering shells never seen
off the icey sea floor sand

now
glowing orange sparks
crackle snap zap the live wire
ignite passion’s fire
melt flesh…..energies require
exploding fireworks slither you into a crazed maze
evolving you through ‘nother phase

then transpire higher
as a soaring spiral
twist through cool whites & warm grays
that embrace in a hazey daze
but you’ll yearn for more
so please
storm through clouds that roar
eternally open
obscured black starry doors
and soar
beyond your core
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Comments: 3

sto67 [2004-09-20 09:14:05 +0000 UTC]

to my favourite DA gal
i will not be here for a while so i will give you some parting words on this piece haha
(you dont have to cringe)

i remember this piece
cos i loved it

its still very good, you just some better internal rhymes
but otherwise i have no complaints, and this relaxed me
rare haha
been so stressed out lately, and this is as close as i will get to literary euphoria for a while to come

have fun these next few months without me!
and wish me luck!!

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arcangle In reply to sto67 [2004-09-20 15:25:05 +0000 UTC]

i'm going to miss you to death!!!! Good luck & be safe......................curious where you're going & why??

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11th-hour [2004-08-27 00:17:47 +0000 UTC]

You are amazing..thats all i can say otherwise *speechless*

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