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Poch0010 [2013-08-28 21:18:50 +0000 UTC]

great to see you are still working : D As to what I think, I think you rush too much while working, I've seen you reference enough to know you can do anatomy better than that if you spend some more time on it, same goes for the whole asymmetrical body, I mean even the eyes are quite greatly different in shape one from the other. I'll assume this is the style you were working up from mutantooze.org/wiki/wp-content… so judging from that I'd recommend you to copy more the round shapes used by the artist there or the way his lines create texture Also your works are often too plastic, the poses seem forced and the shapes of the body look too unreal, think of what you are drawing as something living, don't study only the way muscles look, study the way they work, study the bones beneath them and study their sizes and their limit of movement, in order to avoid legs or arms which seem broken.

As for the good side, proportions worked out rather nicely, it seems you've got that pretty much down for the moment, and even though the shading isn't perfect, you very well know about light sources, and you could show the one here finely, which is more than many amateurs are capable, you just got to practice it some more : ) Hope you don't take my critique harshly, and most of all I hope it helps you in any ways once again good to see you working digitally again, keep it up!

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