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your style looks a lot like MArc Silvestri's which i really love
great flow of story but the third panel deceives the eye as to where our hero is headed
well done
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Thanks for the input my friend, you are right
As you see, my style already changed, this is my old project about 3 years ago
Yes, Silvestri is one of my favorite artist.
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whose isnt??
yep as i went thru your gallery i noticed that. you got more matured in your technique
kudos
cheers
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you are most welcome
it was my pleasure
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keren, kayanya musti baca komiknya biar nyambung nih
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Hey!
Really nice job with the line art and story telling! It looks as if you've studied your fav. artists very well. I am in school right now and am trying to break in to the "biz" myself. Your work is awesome! If i might offer one suggestion.
The object of the comic artist is story telling. You seem to have it down pretty well. Try make this page flow even better you might try this. Take the first panel and flip it so that the character is looking down towards the second panel. That will lead the readers eye. Do the same thing with the third panel so that he is facing toward the fourth panel.
I know alot about this stuff "in theory", however my practice of it is much more limited than yours appears to be. I would love any advice you might have to offer to make me a better artists.
Keep up the good work!!
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Very nice line work as well as flow in the panels. Great storytelling: makes me want to know more about the situation! Is this a project for publication you're making now?
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Very very good job, I like the character design and the inks... great lighting. Story is a little weak in the last couple panels though, but that's mostly because it's only one page. More pages would make it make more sense 
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Good balance of light and darks, and great figure work, not sure whats happening in the middle panels though. Very professional quality.
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i think it's friggin awesome! that's what i think^^
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layout is nicely balanced, the lines well defined, all adding up to a very bold and striking page... the story is well presented, making good use of the less is more mentality which is sorely lacking in 'comics' these days... and 'the prisoner' looks downright creepy...
love it
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