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Published: 2012-01-12 12:24:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 253; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 6
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OK, rediculous name, I know. Working on it.Mainly to show Lav... but if anyone would like to offer advice here- this is my first go at drawing Spike (the guy on the right) and I've no idea how to do his "blonde and black" hair... I've given it a go! Also, I'm terrible at drawing males. This is also my first real attempt at Blue (guess which one she is?), since I can never get lekku right. Please offer advice! Fuzzy (or Sara-Lea, as we know her!) is not quite there yet, evidently.
Essentially, I'm posting this to get advice, since I want this one to be good.
If not, I'm doing it again. And again. And again- until its good. 
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The top of Bel's head needs to be higher which will bring her lekku higher as well. Also they need to be plumper. She looks a little like someone took a thumbtack to her skull XD
I'm very very sorry my dear, but Spikes hair doesn't really look blonde/black... I think the patches need to be more distinct.
Try referencing this: [link]
(Also a little EC for an added bonus XD)
However- Sara looks fantastic, Bel's body is gorgeous (ly drawn o.O) and from what I can see of the lineart- I finally know what Spike looks like and it's just opened up a whole world of understanding about him that I couldn't get to before!
This is going to be AMAZING when it's finished and I can't wait to see it!!
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cheers for the help. I do know that Bel's lekku are supposed to be that slender, but yeah, I was thinking maybe I've made the cranium too low...
Ooh handy ref pic thanks 
Thanks for the advice, dearie! I'll get to work
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Plumper up the top (which will automatically happen a wee bit when you heighten the cranium)
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Ohh, I see what you mean. Cheers.
I'm going to start from scratch on this one, I think, to fix it all up.
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I'm afraid I don't really have much constructive to offer on this one, my dear. I love their poses, and Bel's lekku look pretty well accurate to me. The black/blonde hair could use work, definitely. I guess you're just going to have to experiment with that one. C:
I do look forward to seeing the finished picture though. XD
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Yay!
I mean seriously- who has blonde/black hair? SODDING NEAR-HUMANS...
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