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AriaQueiroz — Lua Ciruela [RWBY OC]

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Published: 2016-03-02 01:35:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 2884; Favourites: 67; Downloads: 6
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My RWBY Original Character. Do Not Steal.

Lua Ciruela - Team GLTC

- Lua: Means “moon” in portuguese
- Ciruela: spanish for “plum”

Lua Ciruela is the high-tech girl from Team GLTC. She loves technology more then people. In fact, the first thing she sees in an opponent is the their weapon, and criticize the flaws in it. For Lua, no weapon is better than her weapon.
Lua is not a girl who keeps things to herself, she says everything she’s thinking, especially her criticism.

Weapon: Pandora

Inside her suitcase she keeps two “ball robots” called A (Alpha) and B (Beta). A and B can  hit the enemies, like a cannon ball. They can also walk like a really fast spider when they release their legs. The “spider legs” can also cut the enemies.

Semblance: Invisibility

As the name says, Lua can become invisible. But her invisibility is not perfect. Sometimes the enemy can see a little “imperfection” in the air and then realize that is her.

(sorry for my bad English) 

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Comments: 9

TheAsianGuyLOL [2016-03-02 08:25:10 +0000 UTC]

Lovely design, though I would recommend reducing the arm band into one thin one or remove them if that's ok. Based on her character, I bet you can call her savage? Lol.

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AriaQueiroz In reply to TheAsianGuyLOL [2016-03-03 00:39:55 +0000 UTC]

Maybe i'll consider your idea And, well... I wouldn't say savage, but maybe something similar lol

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Pachumaster [2016-03-02 03:38:36 +0000 UTC]

I like the concept of the weapon. the headset, pose and hair go well with the character. my biggest complaint are those arm bands and the cuts in the area below her neck, I feel they look awkward. I imagine you considered a sleeveless or short- sleve dress at one point, what made you desist?

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AriaQueiroz In reply to Pachumaster [2016-03-03 00:42:35 +0000 UTC]

Well, a changed her design a lot. It's hard to say what a didn't change from the beginning.

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Pachumaster In reply to AriaQueiroz [2016-03-03 02:47:52 +0000 UTC]

ah, so you did it and were not happy with it? I see. to be fair I am not sure what I would do myself then, perhaps some futuristic asymetric small armor pads on the shoulders? it'l prrolly breack the char tho.

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DragonKid36 [2016-03-02 02:35:05 +0000 UTC]

Cool looking OC

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AriaQueiroz In reply to DragonKid36 [2016-03-03 00:34:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you :3

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DragonKid36 In reply to AriaQueiroz [2016-03-03 01:04:38 +0000 UTC]

you are welcome my friend   

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AriaQueiroz In reply to DragonKid36 [2016-03-03 02:43:12 +0000 UTC]

xD

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