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Aristochatt — What if Scourge joined ThunderClan?

Published: 2011-11-24 14:16:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 4804; Favourites: 138; Downloads: 0
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Description Phew, it's done! Took 2 1/2 hours! by trackpad

So pretty much, my What If story is what if Scourge had been adopted into ThunderClan?
I mean, the chances that Thistleclaw and Tigerpaw were in the patrol that found him were rather slim. So imagine if it was Bluefur and someone else? I think they might've taken pity on him and adopted him.
As Erin Hunter said themselves, Scourge was a lot like Firestar. He had all the things needed to make a great leader; confident, wise, tactful, cunning and loyal to his comrades.

I think that Bluefur would've been his mentor, since she found him and probably persuaded the Clan to let him join. He would've moved up ranks swiftly like Firestar, and soon became a young deputy under Sunstar. Although Sunstar would've picked Bluefur, Featherwhisker recieved an omen about Scourge becoming a great leader, so there wasn't much indecision.

Thistleclaw would've hated kittypets even more, and passed this hatred down to Tigerclaw and then to Darkstripe. Longtail however, would've been more supportive about kittypets along with the rest of his Clan because of Scourge.

Firestar would've been born and join the Clan nevertheless and would become the next leader in due time. They don't know that they're related though. Scourge would probably take him as his apprentice due to their similarities and past. Scourge's deputy would be either Lionheart, Whitestorm or Redtail

The full picture? A more docile ThunderClan, a wise and legendary Scourge [Name?], a young Firepaw, and an even more bloodthirsty Tigerclaw.


Edit on Name: I'm most likely going to use 'Dark' as a prefix! I just need a suffix right now. Darkeyes? Darkfur? Darkpelt?


EDIT: Woah.. what's up with all the faves? 33 overnight! Thank-you all so much for the faves! This is now my most faved piece!
Sorry, i couldn't thank everyone individually, but once again, the system thinks I'm spamming.
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Comments: 132

scourge-darkheart In reply to ??? [2012-01-07 18:27:20 +0000 UTC]

Yeah got exams soon to

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catpain [2012-01-02 15:03:01 +0000 UTC]

Nice idea

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Aristochatt In reply to catpain [2012-01-06 20:28:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^

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catpain In reply to Aristochatt [2012-01-07 10:29:54 +0000 UTC]

No Prob

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73awesome [2011-12-29 01:49:14 +0000 UTC]

whitefoot would be scourges name....

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Aristochatt In reply to 73awesome [2011-12-29 08:48:29 +0000 UTC]

*le headdesk* ...That name... makes perfect sense! And it's so simple! Why the hell didn't I think of it?

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73awesome In reply to Aristochatt [2011-12-29 21:40:21 +0000 UTC]

DD i fel smart!! i have a great idea!

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dogs-dont-byte [2011-12-08 02:31:09 +0000 UTC]

Woah! I love this so much!
The details and anatomy are amazing, and the background is really good rather than something cheap or just scribbles, and I love Firestar's face and Scourge's Scar and especially how tigerstar looks!
I really REALLY love all of your art but i think that this is one of your best pieces!

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Aristochatt In reply to dogs-dont-byte [2011-12-11 10:34:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! The anatomy is bleh for me though, I need to practice paws >__< I admit that this is probably one of my favourite pieces ^^ Although maybe a bit of more effort on the rocks couldn't hurt...

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dogs-dont-byte In reply to Aristochatt [2011-12-11 21:01:27 +0000 UTC]

woah, you are one of the only artists i know who actually point out where they mess up D

and im sure as you keep going youll get much better ^^

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Aristochatt In reply to dogs-dont-byte [2011-12-24 08:11:59 +0000 UTC]

Seriously? I can ONLY find flaws

Thanks for the support though I hope I get better, but I can only whip out a drawing once every 2 months or something due to study >__<

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dogs-dont-byte In reply to Aristochatt [2012-01-02 02:30:10 +0000 UTC]

oh D: i guess good grades are worth it though huh X3

well i know ull get better D ur already really good ^^

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Aristochatt In reply to dogs-dont-byte [2012-01-06 19:42:02 +0000 UTC]

I guess. I hate school to the bone though. 5 more projects due next week, and I've done none.

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dogs-dont-byte In reply to Aristochatt [2012-01-07 06:27:21 +0000 UTC]

THNAKS FOR REMINDING ME. >
i have this stupid 5 page thing due on monday. UGH.

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Aristochatt In reply to dogs-dont-byte [2012-01-07 16:12:40 +0000 UTC]

Eeek! Sorry!

My english is 8 pages D: And i haven't even done a page yet.

You have school on Sunday?

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dogs-dont-byte In reply to Aristochatt [2012-01-08 03:35:35 +0000 UTC]

no but its an online thing that i have to do if i wanna pass *grumble grumble*
and omg arent you worried that its such a long thing to do and you havent started? XDD

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Aristochatt In reply to dogs-dont-byte [2012-01-08 10:05:51 +0000 UTC]

I have 15 hours left before my doom - sleep included. None done...

But it's so hard! I have to write a comparative essay on different texts of Romeo and Juliet! I altered mine, so I have to compare Maximum Ride with Romeo and Juliet about the relationships and how love affects bonds between characters and their actions.

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dogs-dont-byte In reply to Aristochatt [2012-01-11 22:53:31 +0000 UTC]

lol XD i woulve chosen those too haha XDD i <3 maximum ride lol

and how did it go in the end? :3

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Aristochatt In reply to dogs-dont-byte [2012-01-14 00:41:18 +0000 UTC]

I got a good grade - 8c, which sort of means that I JUST got an A+.

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dogs-dont-byte In reply to Aristochatt [2012-01-16 18:42:09 +0000 UTC]

yayy D *glomp!*

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scourge-darkheart In reply to ??? [2011-12-03 13:54:30 +0000 UTC]

hmmm Darklight? Darkclaw

wait wouldn't it be Darkstar if he's leader now?

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Aristochatt In reply to scourge-darkheart [2011-12-04 03:16:27 +0000 UTC]

Cool names!

Indeed it woould, but he does spend most of his like with a warrior name, so I like having a full one for him ^^

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scourge-darkheart In reply to Aristochatt [2011-12-04 11:23:00 +0000 UTC]

okay and thanks ^^

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MoonxScourge In reply to ??? [2011-11-28 16:46:58 +0000 UTC]

if scourge became a clan cat i'd call him bloodfang...

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Aristochatt In reply to MoonxScourge [2011-11-29 15:01:27 +0000 UTC]

I don't think Sunstar would call a tiny kittypet Bloodpaw though :\

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MoonxScourge In reply to Aristochatt [2011-11-29 16:20:52 +0000 UTC]

nah. probs not. other than that i like darksoul or somthing...

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cmoffitt1 [2011-11-27 06:47:00 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! Love the idea! Hmm.. What about... DarkSky DarkFlight DarkWind DarkFrost DarkBlood DarkSkull DarkClaw DarkTail DarkStream DarkStone DarkShadow DarkCloud DarkGaze DarkMist DarkThorn DarkFoot DarkPool DarkFlash DarkSong DarkLeap DarkStrike DarkWing or DarkStorm DarkWhisker DarkRain ?? Lol lots of names sorry XD

Darksoul sounds cool :3

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Aristochatt In reply to cmoffitt1 [2011-11-27 07:01:23 +0000 UTC]

Darkflash, Darkstorm, Darkstrike... Gah! So many good names! I like Darkthorn as well

I think I'll go with Darkthorn or Darkflash.

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cmoffitt1 In reply to Aristochatt [2011-11-28 06:28:15 +0000 UTC]

2 of my favs I would have went with DarkFlash myself Im glad you like them ^-^ I got excited when i read ur scourge thunderclan idea and took like 20min thinking of names that would fit him lol XD Im happy i could help out ^^

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Aristochatt In reply to cmoffitt1 [2011-12-02 18:29:17 +0000 UTC]

Darkflash is a popular name Thank-you for spending so much time on my concept! I may make some more if I can think of some

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TheJinxedJailer In reply to ??? [2011-11-26 14:29:01 +0000 UTC]

Maybe Darksoul or soemthing? Awesome theory and drawing!

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Aristochatt In reply to TheJinxedJailer [2011-11-26 15:04:18 +0000 UTC]

Awesome name! I was thinking of using Darkheart, but I just really don't think that the 'heart' suffix is suitable for a 'Dark' prefix xD But 'soul' sounds awesome.

Bleh, wish I could make a poll on this!

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TheJinxedJailer In reply to Aristochatt [2011-11-27 16:34:42 +0000 UTC]

lol thks. Darkheart would be cool tho, since he may hold agrudge with Ruby and Socks>

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Aristochatt In reply to TheJinxedJailer [2011-11-28 09:35:18 +0000 UTC]

Very true.

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katribou [2011-11-25 22:49:17 +0000 UTC]

Very interesting concept, I would have never thought of that. ^^
I like the dim lighting and the expression of the one in the bottom right corner.
And by trackpad?!?!?! My, you're amazing. ;u;

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Aristochatt In reply to katribou [2011-11-26 03:05:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I was reading 'Rise of Scourge' when I saw the contest, so it mixed together in my head
Trust me, this piece looks like crap without the lighting xD I added them in because the piece had that 'child-happy' feel, with all the brightness and over-saturated colours.
The Line-Art was tablet, but the rest was trackpad I'm actually more at ease with trackpads than tablets. There isn't as much wobble.
Psh, amazing xD The only real reason that I have the sketchy lines is because I am honestly no longer able to make solid, smooth line-art D:

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katribou In reply to Aristochatt [2011-11-26 21:28:34 +0000 UTC]

Aha. The sketchy lines make it look very distinguished however. So awesome job.

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Aristochatt In reply to katribou [2011-11-28 13:53:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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silentwind13 In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 18:25:02 +0000 UTC]

OMG I love this idea!! Very original!
The art is very good too, with sketchy lines, and that beautiful lighting!

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Aristochatt In reply to silentwind13 [2011-11-26 03:18:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!
I actually use sketchy lines because I can't draw decent line-art anymore >__< It's actually the sketch coloured in.
I really like the lighting too I was going for a morning atmosphere with a wise aura coming off of Scourge. Did it work?

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silentwind13 In reply to Aristochatt [2011-11-26 10:41:25 +0000 UTC]

Well, the lines give it a nice effect. I didn't notice the lines were the sketch
Yeah, the lighting and Scourge's expression and pose makes him seem so wise, knowing, and caring.

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Aristochatt In reply to silentwind13 [2011-11-26 12:25:42 +0000 UTC]

I think so as well. It's easier, faster and gives a 'fluffy' effect xD
I practiced that expression a lot. I love it, and that's how I smile Thanks for all the positive comments!

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Stepping-In-Flames In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 16:06:17 +0000 UTC]

I think his name should be. . . . Tinyear of Tiny pelt, of maybe Blackpelt or Whitefoot.

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Aristochatt In reply to Stepping-In-Flames [2011-11-25 17:13:04 +0000 UTC]

The pelt suffix seems to be popular xD Although, I think I'll keep with Dark as a prefix.

Darkfur or Darkpelt?

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Stepping-In-Flames In reply to Aristochatt [2011-11-25 17:27:54 +0000 UTC]

yeah, yeah. OH! Darkeyes! Cus I imagin hims with dark blue eyes!

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Aristochatt In reply to Stepping-In-Flames [2011-11-25 18:18:50 +0000 UTC]

I imagine him with sky-blue eyes But it's still a good name. I'll edit the description to add the names

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Stepping-In-Flames In reply to Aristochatt [2011-11-25 19:27:36 +0000 UTC]

cool!

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Rowena-Bensel In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 15:23:56 +0000 UTC]

Nice. You obviously put a lot of thought into this. I can't easily change one event in a story and see how it turns out. I mostly follow the story itself. Awesome job and keep on arting.

--
I'm a witch of Hogwarts, a knight of Tortall, a Sorceress of Aloria and a girl of Ohio.

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Aristochatt In reply to Rowena-Bensel [2011-11-25 17:17:53 +0000 UTC]

It's easier for me to warp the stroy actually I dunno, 'what if' scenarios are something I often think about. To be truthful, I didn't think deeply about the concept until I started writing the description and ideas exploded in my head.
I have trouble keeping the story on track xD I guess that we think differently?

Thank-you for the praise I've taken a year-long hiatus off art, so I'm glad to know I haven't lost any skill.

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GrowlitheArtistGirl In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 13:00:04 +0000 UTC]

Interesting concept. Scourge becoming leader...? Very interesting...

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