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Aristochatt — What if Scourge joined ThunderClan?

Published: 2011-11-24 14:16:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 4804; Favourites: 138; Downloads: 0
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So pretty much, my What If story is what if Scourge had been adopted into ThunderClan?
I mean, the chances that Thistleclaw and Tigerpaw were in the patrol that found him were rather slim. So imagine if it was Bluefur and someone else? I think they might've taken pity on him and adopted him.
As Erin Hunter said themselves, Scourge was a lot like Firestar. He had all the things needed to make a great leader; confident, wise, tactful, cunning and loyal to his comrades.

I think that Bluefur would've been his mentor, since she found him and probably persuaded the Clan to let him join. He would've moved up ranks swiftly like Firestar, and soon became a young deputy under Sunstar. Although Sunstar would've picked Bluefur, Featherwhisker recieved an omen about Scourge becoming a great leader, so there wasn't much indecision.

Thistleclaw would've hated kittypets even more, and passed this hatred down to Tigerclaw and then to Darkstripe. Longtail however, would've been more supportive about kittypets along with the rest of his Clan because of Scourge.

Firestar would've been born and join the Clan nevertheless and would become the next leader in due time. They don't know that they're related though. Scourge would probably take him as his apprentice due to their similarities and past. Scourge's deputy would be either Lionheart, Whitestorm or Redtail

The full picture? A more docile ThunderClan, a wise and legendary Scourge [Name?], a young Firepaw, and an even more bloodthirsty Tigerclaw.


Edit on Name: I'm most likely going to use 'Dark' as a prefix! I just need a suffix right now. Darkeyes? Darkfur? Darkpelt?


EDIT: Woah.. what's up with all the faves? 33 overnight! Thank-you all so much for the faves! This is now my most faved piece!
Sorry, i couldn't thank everyone individually, but once again, the system thinks I'm spamming.
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Comments: 132

Aristochatt In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 13:07:24 +0000 UTC]

I think that he would have the qualities to be one. I mean, he managed to control BloodClan, which I needn't say is a challenge. But I think that he would be more aggressive and impulsive than Firestar because of his past with his siblings. I also think he might have a bit of a Napoleon-complex xD

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GrowlitheArtistGirl In reply to Aristochatt [2011-11-25 13:20:46 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, he is definitely leader quality... It would be cool.

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firheart In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 10:49:49 +0000 UTC]

wow what a tackical thought

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IbiteU In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 06:39:06 +0000 UTC]

He was fond as what we call an apprentice right? well I think he should be Lonepaw/breeze/star or he could be Named something like Midnightpaw/claw and then he steps up and asks forhis name to be Lonestar! Hey... could I write a fan ficon this?

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Aristochatt In reply to IbiteU [2011-11-25 13:04:04 +0000 UTC]

I think he would be around 5-6 moons I think. That's normally when kittens get adopted, and his litter-mates were already being taught fighting moves. So yeah, like a beginner apprentice.

I think that the Lonestar idea is epic Although, Midnight is sort of un-warrior and sounds off. I think Dark____ would be epic though Darkfang? Darkpebble? I need a name that could reflect his past and his size

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IbiteU In reply to Aristochatt [2011-11-27 09:50:08 +0000 UTC]

Hmmmmm? Darkfang is pretty cool... it is really difficult to think of names tht kinda incorporate his hieght and past but really if it's anything like your little explaination then technically he shouldn't have a past so something like Littlefang, Darkpelt, Darkstep or Sootclaw would do for adequet names.

And would you mind if I wrote a fan fic on this? I'd link all the credit to you and this pic in the description.

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Aristochatt In reply to IbiteU [2011-12-04 11:32:50 +0000 UTC]

I like all those names In the end, it's the viewers choice, but I need help because I'm indecisive >__<

Of course! I'd be honoured if you wrote a fanfiction on this! Could you send me a link to it when you're done?

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IbiteU In reply to Aristochatt [2011-12-04 21:47:09 +0000 UTC]

Sure, I think it'd be great if it was a chapter story of him growing up in the ThunderClan camp, I also have an awesomeplot twist thrown in there as well

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Aristochatt In reply to IbiteU [2011-12-07 15:44:43 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! I can't wait for it to be done!

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IbiteU In reply to Aristochatt [2011-12-11 07:56:09 +0000 UTC]

I'll message you as soon as the firt chapter's up!

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Aristochatt In reply to IbiteU [2011-12-11 10:35:04 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Thanks again!

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HoneyFrost211 In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 03:34:19 +0000 UTC]

Id rename scourge... hm... Blackkit Black paw the Blackstar
and after he dies the original black kit will be born

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Aristochatt In reply to HoneyFrost211 [2011-11-25 09:43:11 +0000 UTC]

I was thinking that too, but I didn't know when Blackfoot was born so it might've been awkward to have deputies with the same name.

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HoneyFrost211 In reply to Aristochatt [2011-11-25 14:47:34 +0000 UTC]

hm.... then what about i dunno Dark? Darkkit Darkpaw Darkpelt then
Darkstar rofl

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Aristochatt In reply to HoneyFrost211 [2011-11-25 16:09:24 +0000 UTC]

Dark sounds awesome Thanks for the help! I'm now between Darkfur and Darkpelt.

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CorvusAlas In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 02:57:14 +0000 UTC]

This is an awesome idea!

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Aristochatt In reply to CorvusAlas [2011-11-25 09:16:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I came up with it last minute, and everything just exploded from that.

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Krazed-Blue-n-Freaky In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 02:56:31 +0000 UTC]

omg you should write a little story like that!

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Aristochatt In reply to Krazed-Blue-n-Freaky [2011-11-25 09:42:29 +0000 UTC]

I would if I had the time

Plus, I'm writing another fanfiction right now; Lone Tigris. Pretty much what I think would happen if Leopardstar refused to fight BloodClan.

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Krazed-Blue-n-Freaky In reply to Aristochatt [2011-11-25 18:54:00 +0000 UTC]

o

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Angelcloud0090 In reply to ??? [2011-11-24 23:04:22 +0000 UTC]

hmmmm Whitescratch? Fangstar? X3

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Aristochatt In reply to Angelcloud0090 [2011-11-25 09:15:28 +0000 UTC]

I think he would've named himself that, but then again, he was only a tiny little kitten when he was found. I don't think Sunstar would've given him a fierce name xD

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VampyKit In reply to ??? [2011-11-24 18:40:53 +0000 UTC]

Looks great~
If you're okay with noting me with your mailing address then I'd be happy to go ahead and order your print ^^

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Aristochatt In reply to VampyKit [2011-11-25 13:04:38 +0000 UTC]

I would, but I live in Jakarta, Indonesia. Wouldn't that be too far away?

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VampyKit In reply to Aristochatt [2011-11-25 20:54:55 +0000 UTC]

I could check~
The place that I'm ordering from does ship internationally, so if you give me your address I can see if it'll work :3

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xX-NIGHTBANEWOLF-Xx In reply to VampyKit [2011-11-24 22:42:03 +0000 UTC]

Te contest ends today, right?

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VampyKit In reply to xX-NIGHTBANEWOLF-Xx [2011-11-24 22:46:06 +0000 UTC]

Yep
At midnight tonight to be accurate

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xX-NIGHTBANEWOLF-Xx In reply to VampyKit [2011-11-25 01:05:55 +0000 UTC]

lol, its next day for me already

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VampyKit In reply to xX-NIGHTBANEWOLF-Xx [2011-11-25 01:28:40 +0000 UTC]

Let me rephrase then, at midnight U.S. central time to be exact XD

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xX-NIGHTBANEWOLF-Xx In reply to VampyKit [2011-11-25 01:31:54 +0000 UTC]

awww

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NuzlockerArty In reply to ??? [2011-11-24 16:13:40 +0000 UTC]

Eh, Tinystar?

Don't think he likes the name to begin with, though.

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Aristochatt In reply to NuzlockerArty [2011-11-24 22:45:13 +0000 UTC]

That what I was thinking too. I have feeling he might say Scourge like he did with the alleycats, but then again, Firestar was renamed.

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NuzlockerArty In reply to Aristochatt [2011-11-25 01:56:02 +0000 UTC]

True, but when Tigerpaw found him, he was still a kitten. He probably would've said Tiny.
Or maybe you're right.

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Aristochatt In reply to NuzlockerArty [2011-11-25 09:03:46 +0000 UTC]

Very true. But I think that he might've told the patrol that found him his real name. But at the Clan, maybe Tiny would be too weak of a name? They were cynical over Firestar, even though he had already beaten Graypaw and was brought in by their leader and two senior warriors.

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NuzlockerArty In reply to Aristochatt [2011-11-25 15:32:39 +0000 UTC]

This is true, you've got some good points.

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