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Aron-green — Comic - 02 - Setting Out
Published: 2008-07-22 09:31:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 3496; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 18
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God dang it. I wish this comic hadn't taken this long to complete and upload. The fact is I've been lazy and working my ass off for people who don't think my best is good enough. It's already half the summer and I have only two of my comic series uploaded. XD Progress is moving...but fataly slow. Don't worry, though I do plan to keep the series going.I know I may have been lax when it came to details, but it came out how I wanted it, so shush all of ya! This is also the first time I've drawn Lilo. Humans are hard for me they are...o.o
I know not too much action is happening here with this comic, but please keep in mind that I have to get a setting, plot, and character development out first so the story is easy to understand.
Good grief I need to make my next comic come out faster. >_<
Lilo and Stitch © Disney
Aron © me
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Comments: 43
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this is a cool comic series! keep up the good work!
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your welcome, and take a look at my newest journal please cuz i need help with something
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This is Awesome! where is the first comic of this at though?
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Thank you ^^ the first one is in my gallery
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It's in my third comic!
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Critique time! (note, you asked for it...)
Well, to start, your characters aren't consistent... Aaron looks a lot different in panel 1 and panel 2 and he shouldn't. Now, your cells themselves... they are too consistent. I mean, every character is equally distant to the viewer. Think of a comic as a movie. You can't have the exact same thing in every shot. There's establishing shots that set up a location. Close-ups to focus on emotion (I loved the extreme close-up of his eye in the last comic, for instance) angles... all kinds of things. Experiment! This is way old, but maybe you can get an idea of how I do it... [link] Different angles, different views, even break-outs (though that's a matter of style). Mix it up. Your backgrounds... are weak. Not that you can't do simple backgrounds like that effectively... it's just not working here.
So, there you go. Harsh, I know, but you asked for a tough one!
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Hahahaa!
I wonder what happens when Aron meets Lilo and Stitch. It will be hilarious.
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hehe, Comic is looking awesome, Aron is funny XD
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Thanks!
He tries to be
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Lilo came out great!
Little stick figuresXD
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Thank you!
it won't be long now! XD
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For your first time drawing Lilo, I think it turned out incredible! OwO
Another lovely page, I have a feeling this will be a very interesting comic ;D
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Thank you! ^^
Yes it should be!
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Alright, looks awesome! Bright, colorful, awesome backgrounds, it's too much, my head will pop! *POP*
Anyway, I'll keep in mind the summer will keep ya busy, so I'm patient! (That's what I'm known for XD)
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Thanks!
heh yeah XD I wanted as many hawaiian colors as I could though I've never been.
Cool then. ^^
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No problem! I would've asked you to make a comic detailing my dilemma involving Angel, but you don't do requests, so....forget it T_T
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Keep it up! *fav*
Can't wait to see what he does when he meets some female experiments. 
I think my favorite panel is #3, nice scene there.
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Thanks!
It should be happening soon!
Yeah for that one I was just trying to go for perspective. If I don't like the way something looks, I'll cover it up with something in the foreground XD
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Oh my god I see lots of improvement in this pic 
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Looks awesome! x3 The captions are funny, and I really like how you draw backgrounds in your pics.
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Thank you!
The backgrounds are fun to make but they hard to make to make it look like it's from the series. XD
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This looks awesome! I love Aron's funny comments and how you drew Lilo ^^
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Thank you!
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Cuz she is a little girl xD and np
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Looks extremely awsome!
Love the little stick figures in the background :3 They should appear more often in the storyline XD
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Thank you!
Yeah, I made them to give the picture more depth and people could get a better idea on what the background is.
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You did an awesome job with Lilo 
Love the style of this comic so far 
Very well done 
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Thanks!
hee hee *sings you say tomato, I say tomato*
Yup, they're there for depth purposes.^^
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Awsome second comic! I am liking it so far
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Thank you!
Gotta love those hawaiian bright colors!
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Your welcome
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