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arsenedaubrecq ā Burglars Inc. 3, part 4
Published: 2010-01-29 16:16:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 2188; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 70
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Emilie is finally put to sleep by the bad bad female burglar.I wanted to try a panel sequence for a change
Tell me what you think.
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Comments: 5
great! just what I was thinking of!!
Good thinking of you to do this one!
here my critic is little: the emotions are well portrayed but, the lower eyelids are curving in a rough (solid) way, making like it is horrendously harming the woman.
It just need some soft passing out effects and it will passed as perfect (There are some great people in drawing chloroformed females here_ blogman has one_ go see it, it will benefit you)
(in my opinion for sure!!)
hope my critic is constructive, and hope you the best!
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Thanks for your feedback! Actually, I wanted to make her look really tired, not suffering! I don't want to harm women! I'll try to better this point
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I've looked at the panel again. She doesn't seem to be suffering, maybe just grumpy in nĀ°3
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I am very confident of you!
Don't let my critic get you down!
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It's ok! I love your comments and take is as constructive remarks! By the way = 2 more pics updated
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