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Published: 2015-09-14 00:54:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 412; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 0
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An illustration of one of the characters in my webcomic! She's much older in the webcomic, but this is her in her youth. She's got a very interesting past.In the comic she's the unofficial guardian of my MC. She cares for them from afar and helps them be more or less self-sufficient. But she does so quietly, because supporting those two siblings is not a popular position to be in their town...
It was originally just a sketch but I got carried away again. :/ Oh well. It's good lighting practice.
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taibossigai [2015-09-15 16:31:53 +0000 UTC]
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Very cool - I like how the light glows off her hair and the stray hairs. She seems to have an aura of kindness about her. Her body pose with the one hand outstretched gives an impression that she is a warm person and welcoming. The only changes I would suggest would be to adjust her ring finger on her right hand (the one on her hip) - it looks a little shorter than the others, and the iris in her left eye looks slightly larger than the right - perhaps it's intentional? Even still, with how her face is posed she seems to have a bit of a tough don't-mess-with-me attitude.
I like the simplicity of the background - it doesn't detract from the main subject but gives us an idea of where she is. I also love the use of the soft pencil lines, it gives a nice impression of traditional art. Overall, this makes me want to find out more about her history. Keep up the great work! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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ARTabstraction In reply to taibossigai [2015-09-16 17:24:07 +0000 UTC]
Aw thanks for the care and crit! I see that thing with the finger as well- thanks for pointing it out! I see the eye as well. Hm. I had intended that eye to be a little bigger, but not the pupil to be so.Ā
I'm glad you like it! They'll be more of her to come. She's a pretty big character in my comic, so.Ā
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taibossigai In reply to ARTabstraction [2015-09-20 13:47:42 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome! Of course, the difference is very slight.
Glad to hear there will be more.
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TL-97 [2015-09-20 06:24:28 +0000 UTC]
Ah, cool a new character, I'm liking how much it seems you've thought out her past and made it relevant to her character too. It's always fun to develop characters like that. Though now I wonder why supporting the siblings is not a good position to be in?.. Curious and it makes me think of the possibilities.
It turned out great for a sketch that got carried away though. ^^ The lighting is quite nice, and you're pretty good with backgrounds really.
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ARTabstraction In reply to TL-97 [2015-09-21 19:39:29 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I really love her lol. I really need to do sketchdumps of all the sketches I've been doing lately for this comic....
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TL-97 In reply to ARTabstraction [2015-09-23 11:28:26 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome. I bet she will turn out to be a pretty awesome character if you put so much love into her. ^^ That would be cool to see, if you got the time and the stuff to show off, I say go for it.
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