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ARTnoob — Flame by-nc-nd
Published: 2007-08-11 05:25:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 98; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description The flame it dances
On the skin
Where it pirouettes
Again and again

The tingle of
An icy blade
Merely delusion
Pain is to blame

For again and again
You see the light
You see the fire
You see the night

But still you're trapped
No place to go
Only flame knows
How slow you go
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faeryswornnymph [2007-09-24 19:41:48 +0000 UTC]

"For again and again
You see the light
You see the fire
You see the night"

good point to make... no flowery words to say, but tis short and sweet - verra good.

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purplelining [2007-08-11 15:34:36 +0000 UTC]

interesting, nicely written as always

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