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Published: 2007-06-21 21:27:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 67; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Oh the water placid be
Cannot find the reflection of me
No matter how hard I see

For oh the quaint water lies
As it engulfs my eyes
Even you, would despise

Misleading is the lake
The image it portrays is fake
Leaves you dry and body ache

Dive in the water cold
Feel the young slip to old
As you melt your body mold

Sink in the mud down
Beneath the water where you drown
Lost forever, never to be found

Waste your life away
You are here to stay
By the lake of your dismay
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BlueShadowM [2008-03-18 17:32:47 +0000 UTC]

I love everything you write. It's amazing. I have been trying to write poetry sometimes but it's never good. I write stories instead (but in the book I just finished there is a horrible song I wrote, don't know why I didn't delited it)

Beneath the water where you drown
Lost forever, never to be found

I like that part the most. I feel like that sometimes.

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