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Artsoni3D — Light in darkness
Published: 2011-12-04 01:24:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 1722; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 0
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Another Scene render with my 3d car model Lamborghini Reventon, enjoy..
made with Cinema 4D
Adobe Photoshop.
Background from aymanko0o [link]
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Your model is 3000 times better than my Lambo. That being written, your render is not that great. I write that with absolute respect and only for your benefit. Normally, I'd just ignore it and move on - but your work is so nice that I think it would be wrong to not write something because to someone who doesn't know anything about the work you put into making the model, it might not give you the credit you absolutely deserve. I unfortunately don't know anything about C4D other than it is another 3D program. Therefore, I cannot give you instruction on what specifically to do.
I will try and suggest what I would do in Maya, which is similar to 3DStudio Max in it's rendering - so I hope C4D is the same. I would recommend that you either put that background into the scene so you can get the reflection of the garage, or using a reflection map on your shader that gives the impression of the garage. Also, if you can do a soft shadow under the car that spreads out, that would look nice too. There are a bunch of lights in the garage that would give a spread out shadow under the car. There should also be some reflection on the ground of the cars underside. I am in no way the greatest renderer in the world, but I just want your work to get the appreciation it deserves. Sorry if I am in anyway rude, I've worked all day
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Thanx!!No problem,it's good critic on my work that you give here,what can i say,
first i have planed some one complicated scene for this project,the background picture i have split in four parts, and adjusted in photoshop for one box form Scene in C4D,so every side of the picture of Garage can be reflected on right side of the car, etc.
the lights places according to real lights position in picture, but after trying that for some days,i Give up,because my slow Pc with 1.5 Gigs memory could not handle that scene,and i was deferred to go for simple scene,wich is not perfect and if i ever get more ram power on my Pc,sure i will make revision of my works...
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I understand completely. Can you do Ambient Occlusion in C4D? That would be easier on your computer and give your detailing the credit it's due.
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It's not Render problem just GI or AO ,
you must know that there are except the looots of 3d car model polygons with hypernurbs ,
the back car lights(red lights) are approximately 40 lights together with ceiling lights,
and i was not ready to wait this time 24 hours,or more, to finish this render scene,
because in time when picture is rendered my PC freezes and is usseles for opening any aplication..better i wait week or two to get some more RAM Memory Power!
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The model of the Lambo looks awesome, just the top reflection of the car looks really off. And I think you should add a slight blur to the center of the background image. Just so that you can see depth in the 2d image.
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I also think that reflection is completely "off": unfitting reflection map + overly strong. But I like the car model very much, and the background choice looks very stylish.
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This looks very close to NFS. I think. Haven't played it in a while.
Anyway, I agree with Cook. The model and background are nice, but the reflection gives the car a weird look.
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The car model is brilliant but you should definatly change that outdoor reflection to something, that fits the background
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Thanx that you liked the car model
the background&floor issue is something that i could not fix in the time when doing the scene,
sure it's something gone wrong, but later hopefully i will fix later .
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