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Published: 2014-08-29 11:06:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 195; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 0
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If you read my journal "My sister has writer's block" then you can probably guess that this is her short story. It's a little messy, but you can't really blame her writing cause she was writing it on a bumpy ice cooler. Here is what it says:I walked out of my house feeling quite excited. "Yes" I thought to myself as I started to walk to the store. "Grandfather said I could buy anything I wanted with the birthday money he gave me and I know just what I want to buy." I continued on to the store when I spotted Angel coming towards me. "Oh no." I thought starting to blush. "Angel's coming over here." I get very nervous around Angel for a reason I don't know. It's weird because I barely know her. "Hello Gabriel. " She said smiling. "How are you this morning?" I looked at her and began to blush. She looks so pretty; her long wavy dark chocolate hair draped her neck and cascaded down her back softly, her gentle dark chocolate eyes sparkled in the sunlight, and her cheeks were flushed a gentle rosy color due to the cool winds caressing them. Suddenly, I realized that I had been staring at her too long so I quickly hid my now very red face in my scarf. "G-good." I said shyly. "My m-moring's been good. "
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Comments: 19
Kieth-Wolfe [2014-08-30 16:00:10 +0000 UTC]
nice you painted a very lovely scene with your words
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Artsysnowflake In reply to Kieth-Wolfe [2014-08-31 00:45:53 +0000 UTC]
My sister wrote this, I thought so too. She's great!
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MasonicKnight [2014-08-29 19:06:52 +0000 UTC]
Well, you can keep writin'. Writer's block is terrible
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Artsysnowflake In reply to MasonicKnight [2014-08-29 19:13:53 +0000 UTC]
Yeah that's what Snowy says, that it's terrible.
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MasonicKnight In reply to Artsysnowflake [2014-08-29 19:15:03 +0000 UTC]
I know, you and her write stories. I agree, writer's block is terrible
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Artsysnowflake In reply to MasonicKnight [2014-08-29 19:27:47 +0000 UTC]
I don't write stories. She does.
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MasonicKnight In reply to Artsysnowflake [2014-08-29 19:29:14 +0000 UTC]
Oh, that makes sense then
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Artsysnowflake In reply to MasonicKnight [2014-08-29 19:33:31 +0000 UTC]
Did you think we were both writers or what?
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Artsysnowflake In reply to MasonicKnight [2014-08-29 19:53:54 +0000 UTC]
Oh that's okay, I do it as a hobby but my passion is acting.
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Artsysnowflake In reply to redghost187 [2014-08-29 11:29:59 +0000 UTC]
Anything you don't like?
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redghost187 In reply to Artsysnowflake [2014-08-29 11:33:00 +0000 UTC]
no it is pretty good
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Artsysnowflake In reply to redghost187 [2014-08-29 11:37:03 +0000 UTC]
She says that there will be a continuation on her page soon....
I am so favoriting it when she posts it!
How are you today?
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